Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Jake,
This is a fear for some. There will always be a need to build and repair computers. Maybe their will be a choice to let the computer have time off so you can do some work. Maybe there will be more who will use the time to volunteer.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2021

thanks glad you appreiated it

reply by dragonpoet on 22-Apr-2021

You're welcome, Jake.
Joan

Comment from Mary Vigasin

Excellent

While I am for advanced technology, I have to agree with your writing that it can go too far. We need human contact and the very basic human need of feeling productive.
Very well said
Regards
M6

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021

thanks for the feedback

Comment from Janice Canerdy

Excellent

The dramatic increase in the range of robotic abilities is both amazing and
disconcerting. Your poem is well-written and thought-provoking, making excellent use of specific details.

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021

glad you appreciated it

Comment from Pj Dennison

Excellent

Excellent poem! It started rather benign but as it went on it became more intense and that served its purpose because by the end of the poem I was a bit concerned and maybe even a little frightened. The photograph you chose for your poem is perfect.

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021

glad you appreciated it