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Cosmos Wakes Up

when the first real AI wakes up

3 total reviews 
Comment from zanya
Excellent
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A lot of truth narrated here in this poem for the Robots v Humans prompt - we are steadily ceding power to our robots and computers and machines - a new god!! well portrayed here

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
    glad you appreciate it
Comment from Pantygynt
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This is really quite scary, could it ever happen or would the humanity that created the concept always retain sovereignty over its creation? If it cannot as as the poem envisages then there is a bleak future ahead.

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
    glad you liked it
Comment from Kerry L Batchelder
Exceptional
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Excellent job of showing how utterly dependent we are upon the internet today. It is addictive and we are victims of it. We are like sheep heading into the slaughter in a sense as we relinquish all privacy, thereby becoming vulnerable. Sad but true! Your poem was well written, interesting and cute with the name, Cosmos. Well done.

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
    glad you liked it