Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Haha, that'll teach the frog to think about what she is asking. I enjoyed your fun approach to the prompt, Iza. Your lines read well with good dialogue and imagery. I could see this as I read.

can"t--->can't

Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2021

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This mirror story, The Joke, is hilarious as the sarcastic mirror plays games with the social-climbing, magic-addict princess. There a couple punctuation issues, but I'll just point out the final line:

"Oops, the wrong recipe; sorry," said the Mirror laughing. "Bye."

Fun story.

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2021

Comment from Jay Squires

Excellent

This is a cute and cleverly written story that appears to be a spoof on the Prince Charming fairytale.

You have one typo, a minor one, " if you can" t find one, then make one." Use an apostrophe instead of a quote mark in "can't". Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2021

Comment from T B Botts

Excellent

This was well written. I see that you have a great sense of imagination. I really enjoyed the dialogue. I loved the picture as well. It was perfect for this story. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2021

Comment from Goodadvicechan

Excellent

I really enjoy this story. It is fun to go through the story... This can be a story for children although I am a senior and I still enjoy it...

Maybe someday with the development of IT, there may be available a mirror that can show people's princes.

Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2021

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Thank you so much for your wonderful comment:)

Comment from writer723

Excellent

I enjoyed your cute and humorous tale of the princess seeking a prince. The mirror was pretty funny. I especially liked the ending where the hideous creature rises up and the mirror apologizes for using the wrong spell. LOL! You did a great job!

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021

Thank you so much for your wonderful comment:)

Comment from Susan Newell

Excellent

This is a humorous little story that just needs a little touch-up here and there. The wrong recipe part is really funny.

if you can find one, make one ==> can't

Shouldn't she say, "Be my prince," rather than "Prince?"

creature raised ==> arose

Last line: you need ending quotation mark after sorry, and beginning quotation mark before Bye.

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2021