A new beginning
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Comment from Anne Johnston
A very expressive poem about life and love. I particularly like these lines:
"I alone must see it through.
My pen is my only friend,
it holds my thoughts and
my dreams of tomorrow.
It gently rest between my fingers
and pushes me to write."
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2021
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A very expressive poem about life and love. I particularly like these lines:
"I alone must see it through.
My pen is my only friend,
it holds my thoughts and
my dreams of tomorrow.
It gently rest between my fingers
and pushes me to write."
Comment Written 09-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2021
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Thank you again Anne, for a great review, it's been awhile since I put any work out, it's always good to see your smiling face, you bring joy to my work thank you.
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You are welcome, John. Keep writing
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Thanks Anne, have a great weekend.
Comment from lancellot
Very unique, very different. The writing style resembles poetry, but this is not. The theme seems to moving forward expressing the past on paper. Not reliving or reexamining
not sure about the ending quote:
"Working on a heartache
to solve a mystery"
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2021
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Very unique, very different. The writing style resembles poetry, but this is not. The theme seems to moving forward expressing the past on paper. Not reliving or reexamining
not sure about the ending quote:
"Working on a heartache
to solve a mystery"
Comment Written 09-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2021
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Thanks Lancellot, for a great review, it was going to be poetry, but I changed my mind,I'm a little country so I was thinking of a song it still needs some work,when you lose a love you have a heartach,then you dig to know why.
