Pappa's Memories and Ramblings
Viewing comments for Chapter 115 "As Time Flys"Poems, Rants, Short Stories and Ramblings
5 total reviews
Comment from rindy ryan
This is very clever! I'm not good at riddles at all, unfortunately. Tu I do appreciate all that you put into composing this unique and creative poem. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2021
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This is very clever! I'm not good at riddles at all, unfortunately. Tu I do appreciate all that you put into composing this unique and creative poem. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2021
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Thank you for your Support and Review. Blessings to you.
Comment from patcelaw
it seems that the older we get time flies by so much faster. This is a great poem and it was a good read. May your weekend be blessed with good things.
Patricia
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2021
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it seems that the older we get time flies by so much faster. This is a great poem and it was a good read. May your weekend be blessed with good things.
Patricia
Comment Written 09-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2021
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Thanks for Reading and Rating this poem offering,. Bless you and Enjoy your Weekend.
Comment from Earl Corp
Very nice job. I especially liked this line:Time mixed with experience one day becomes Wisdom in your prime. Though I guess I still haven't hit my prime, no wisdom yet.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
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Very nice job. I especially liked this line:Time mixed with experience one day becomes Wisdom in your prime. Though I guess I still haven't hit my prime, no wisdom yet.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
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Thank you for Reading, Reviewing, and Rating this poem offering Mr. Corp. your Story / Wisdom - Teaching based poetry is a highlight I always am Pleased to Review and Learn from. Bless you. We you
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your spring related poem for the club. Your did a good job incorporating the picture into you verse. I like the way you formatted your lines with the words that all rhyme on the line by themselves. There's good flow to your well-chosen words and a great message. Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
it's rhythm-->its
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
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I enjoyed your spring related poem for the club. Your did a good job incorporating the picture into you verse. I like the way you formatted your lines with the words that all rhyme on the line by themselves. There's good flow to your well-chosen words and a great message. Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
it's rhythm-->its
Comment Written 08-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
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Thank you for Reading, Rating and Reviewing your help correcting those punctuation points my brain scrabbles when trying to remember is , Greatly Appreciated. Bless you.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I'm not quite sure what your poem is saying except that time flies and we reflect on our time and enjoy our progress with some regrets and some joy, clever matching end rhymes here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
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I'm not quite sure what your poem is saying except that time flies and we reflect on our time and enjoy our progress with some regrets and some joy, clever matching end rhymes here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
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That's basically it while using as many rhyming references to the items in the picture of the watch and dragon fly in the palm picture. Bless you for your Support and Review.
