Day Deepens Into Dusk
Unrhymed Tercet26 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, these crows are in wait for your words here and I like how crows behave, they have a loyal and commanding quality with justice driving their behaviours, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
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Ha ha ha, these crows are in wait for your words here and I like how crows behave, they have a loyal and commanding quality with justice driving their behaviours, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Wendy G
Beautiful image, and I really like choice of black background with white writing. The turn in the third line is perfect, unexpected and whimsical! An excellent tercet.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
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Beautiful image, and I really like choice of black background with white writing. The turn in the third line is perfect, unexpected and whimsical! An excellent tercet.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from robyn corum
M,
Love, love, LOVE!!!
You must submit this one. Now, now, now, now, NOW!!!!!!!
The first two lines were pretty special but your satori sent this piece over the edge. It always makes my heart so happy to read good haiku. Thank you!
With this poem, I shall sign off for the night. It is the perfect way to end a day of reading.
Submit. Before the end of the week! (said momma)
Yay!!
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
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M,
Love, love, LOVE!!!
You must submit this one. Now, now, now, now, NOW!!!!!!!
The first two lines were pretty special but your satori sent this piece over the edge. It always makes my heart so happy to read good haiku. Thank you!
With this poem, I shall sign off for the night. It is the perfect way to end a day of reading.
Submit. Before the end of the week! (said momma)
Yay!!
Comment Written 08-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much for the super encouraging review. I really appreciate the exceptional rating and six stars. Take care,
Gypsy
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welcome!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Well, I would say the crow must have stirred the haiku poet into writing this great little tercet, Gypsy. I enjoyed its presentation--the images, the color scheme, the alliteration of d, and just the fun of it.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
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Well, I would say the crow must have stirred the haiku poet into writing this great little tercet, Gypsy. I enjoyed its presentation--the images, the color scheme, the alliteration of d, and just the fun of it.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 07-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much, Jan. I appreciate your time and review.
Gypsy
Comment from DonandVicki
The alteration works well to deepen the coming on of evening as the poet settles in to her writing meditation mode. Well written and this creates vivid images.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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The alteration works well to deepen the coming on of evening as the poet settles in to her writing meditation mode. Well written and this creates vivid images.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from kahpot
An excellent Haiku, I will be honest and say the extra star is for the wonderful artwork and overall presentation of this one, and in the top part is that the outline of a (bat) that I see? love the last? line very well written****kahpot
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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An excellent Haiku, I will be honest and say the extra star is for the wonderful artwork and overall presentation of this one, and in the top part is that the outline of a (bat) that I see? love the last? line very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 07-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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I think it is a bat...he sneaked in LoL
Thank you very much for the exceptional review and six stars!
Gypsy
Comment from Erika Seshadri
Lovely! And you always have the best artwork to complement your poetry. I love crows. Back when I did wildlife rehab, I raised a baby crow that had been poisoned. He survived, and grew up big and strong. I let him go one day... He came back to visit me once, and that was it. I never saw him again.
Have a great evening.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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Lovely! And you always have the best artwork to complement your poetry. I love crows. Back when I did wildlife rehab, I raised a baby crow that had been poisoned. He survived, and grew up big and strong. I let him go one day... He came back to visit me once, and that was it. I never saw him again.
Have a great evening.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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Wow, that's awesome. It's sad the crow never came back but it's for the best.
Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Sharon Davis
A very well packaged poem that creates an effective mental image. The artwork enhances the tone of the piece. Thank you for sharing this work. Good job.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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A very well packaged poem that creates an effective mental image. The artwork enhances the tone of the piece. Thank you for sharing this work. Good job.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This unrhymed Haiku, a tarcet 3 line poem, speaks how naturally the day deepens and the crows feathers shine as if the Haiku poet is invited to the darkest scene; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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This unrhymed Haiku, a tarcet 3 line poem, speaks how naturally the day deepens and the crows feathers shine as if the Haiku poet is invited to the darkest scene; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 07-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Debra White
Hello Gypsy :)
The imagery in your tercet is as dark as the deepening dusk, yet it has a rich vividness! I love the whole presentation. Lovely use of alliteration.
Best wishes, Debra
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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Hello Gypsy :)
The imagery in your tercet is as dark as the deepening dusk, yet it has a rich vividness! I love the whole presentation. Lovely use of alliteration.
Best wishes, Debra
Comment Written 07-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
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Thank you very much for reviewing my poem.
Gypsy hugs
