Bye Bye Biggie
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Trevor and the unbearable."Young love and old wounds revisited.
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Comment from Ulla
Hi Lin, this was brilliant writing showing the distress and the accumulating worry about the whole situation. You use the visual signs and the senses to show just that. Now what? Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
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Hi Lin, this was brilliant writing showing the distress and the accumulating worry about the whole situation. You use the visual signs and the senses to show just that. Now what? Ulla:)))
Comment Written 08-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much.
Comment from Lighthouse Keeper
I love your efficient word use to bring clear images of the scene. Your sentences are brief and crisp and pull the reader forward with every line, pausing rarely but for the right moments. You clearly know and understand your characters and how they live; its very visual and clear. Nicely done. Keep at it!
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
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I love your efficient word use to bring clear images of the scene. Your sentences are brief and crisp and pull the reader forward with every line, pausing rarely but for the right moments. You clearly know and understand your characters and how they live; its very visual and clear. Nicely done. Keep at it!
Comment Written 08-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
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Thanks for reading and reviewing. I love my characters...they are as real to me as any person I know. Thanks.
