Comment from rindy ryan

Good

I think this has a lot of potential as a children's poem. They will like all the different characters. Some of your rhymes seem forced for the sake of the rhyme. Good job using the prompt!

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022

Thank you

Comment from Jerome Goldberg

Good

This is a well constructed poem with a nice but unrealistic message. But it promotes hope and that is good. Wish you well as you continue your FanStory journey.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022

Thank you

reply by Jerome Goldberg on 12-Apr-2022

Hi Gina - this is strange - I have not reviewed anything for at least a month.

Comment from Erika Seshadri

Excellent

This is great. I love her little mischievous ways at the beginning to get attention, and then she befriends Generous and learns how to get attention be begin good and making friends. Very cute. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022

Thank you

Comment from Bloomer Burbs

Exceptional

Hi mystery writer

I just love this poem. Great idea to turn jealousy upside down and supersede it with generosity. Simply a great fun read that brought a smile to my face.
I wish you well in the contest.
Take care, Pete

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022

Thank you