Bye Bye Biggie
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Ike The Spike"Young love and old wounds revisited.
2 total reviews
Comment from Leann DS
This is well written with excellent dialogue that carries the plot and gives personality to your characters. I was interested from the beginning until the end. You're writing left me wanting to know what happened next. Well done. Hugs and blessings to you.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
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This is well written with excellent dialogue that carries the plot and gives personality to your characters. I was interested from the beginning until the end. You're writing left me wanting to know what happened next. Well done. Hugs and blessings to you.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
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Thanks for the kind review. It helps to believe some got to essence of what you write. Lin
Comment from Ulla
Hi Lin, to me it seems this is heading towards disaster. I may be wrong, but that is yet to be seen. As usual it's great writing, the dialogue is spot on, and the pace ditto. But I really don't hold my breath on this one. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
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Hi Lin, to me it seems this is heading towards disaster. I may be wrong, but that is yet to be seen. As usual it's great writing, the dialogue is spot on, and the pace ditto. But I really don't hold my breath on this one. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 04-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
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It?s looking kind of bad. Lol. Hope I don?t disappoint with chapters to come. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Lin
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I'm sure you won't. Looking forward to it. :))
