Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Ha, I loved this ZeeZee. It's fresh, it has great pace and it's funny. I sounds like a great beginning to a good story.
sought refuse in his nut sack.= did you mean 'sought refuge in his nut sack.'?
Looking forward to the next part. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2021

Hello! Thanks for the review and yes I meant refuge. Thought I went back and fixed it. Maybe I failed to save it. I have three chapters written. It is just a novella. Not a full book but didn?t know what else to call it. Thanks for the kind words. Lin

reply by Ulla on 03-Apr-2021

Lin, that's what you do on this site. It has to be posted as a novel. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Ulla:)))

Comment from Debra White

Excellent

Hello :)

I really enjoyed reading your story.
I
t come across very well. Zee has a nonchalant and resigned tone which is at the same time engaging, endearing them to the reader.

Well paced and descriptive, the story progresses well and we have a good idea of the setting and surroundings. I really enjoyed the humour too.

I look forward to reading the continuation of the story.

Best wishes, Debra :)

For consideration: 'Testicles the size of walnuts sought refuse (refuge?) in his nut sack.'

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2021

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2021

Thanks much for the kind review, Debra. And also for finding my misspelling. Zee