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Herd About Maggie's Kids

The faces of the sheep alone should bring a smile!

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Comment from Xenia Escobar
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I didn't understand it at first, but then when I looked at the picture I got it. "Reality times 3 just walked in". Lol. Reality times 3. Makes me think of when my aunts and uncles come through. When they walk in, reality times some number, here we go again. Lol.
This was an interesting take on it. This piece made my smile. Thank you.
Good luck in the competition!!

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
    Nothing better than getting a LOL from a lady! Thanks for stopping by and reading my poem.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
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This is a true show of humor. Trying to read the faces of the sheep is useless. They seem to be saying "What now?" Maybe?

"Sheep fantasize of life without
Border Collies to push them 'round
But, reality times 3 just walked in
With mom - now, reality's found!"

Ralf



 Comment Written 16-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
    Thank you for stopping by my sheepish attempt at humor. Glad you enjoyed it! My wife is currently glued to the "telly" watching the funeral of Prince Phillip - commenting that no woman, not even the Queen, should be married to a man for 73 years! After 44, I tend to agree... We hope to visit again someday.
Comment from Susan Newell
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What a humorous poem, and I am amazed that she is actually teaching the pups. I believe is is proper to spell out "three" in the next to the last line. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2021
    Thanks for your review. I took poetic license given the word "times" in a mathematical phrase. Just showing off


reply by Susan Newell on 02-Apr-2021
    Makes sense.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is a fun write and how sweet that these little guys are in training! You made me smile here, the whole presentation is full of fun, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2021
    Your smile is so pretty anyway, glad I could add to it! I just love that picture of those dogs and sheep! Obviously, I found it inspiring, wouldn't ewe say? Thanks for stopping by. Happy Easter
reply by Dolly'sPoems on 02-Apr-2021
    Ha ha ha x x x