Celebrating Life
What is the real reason for the season?12 total reviews
Comment from Stu Harrell
This was beautifully done..it has the spiritual swirl of a really neat work...it is fun and bouncy as well.....Godspeed and Good Luck going forward.......Stu Harrell
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
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This was beautifully done..it has the spiritual swirl of a really neat work...it is fun and bouncy as well.....Godspeed and Good Luck going forward.......Stu Harrell
Comment Written 08-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much. I appreciate your comments and review. Thanks for stopping by! Hugs.
Comment from artisart4u
Your poem is real nice- it has good rhythm, and gives us hope for a new tomorrow because of what Jesus did in order for us to live in a different light.
Each stanza relates to the other, the first four are about Jesus' sacrifice and then the others are about how we celebrate Easter. Very good.
The colors and picture fit right in.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Your poem is real nice- it has good rhythm, and gives us hope for a new tomorrow because of what Jesus did in order for us to live in a different light.
Each stanza relates to the other, the first four are about Jesus' sacrifice and then the others are about how we celebrate Easter. Very good.
The colors and picture fit right in.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much for your encouraging comments. thank you also for your generous six stars. They are humbly appreciated. Hugs.
Comment from Anne Johnston
"There is an important day
That happens every Spring,
When we celebrate the death and life
Of Jesus Christ, our King."
This is a great children's poem, explaining what Easter means. Well done
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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"There is an important day
That happens every Spring,
When we celebrate the death and life
Of Jesus Christ, our King."
This is a great children's poem, explaining what Easter means. Well done
Comment Written 05-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2021
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Thank you. I appreciate your support. Hugs.
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You are welcome
Comment from Aussie
Well done! Good luck in the contest. You have real story for children beginning with Jesus and what He gave us all. Then you go on to tell the children about the meaning of Easter eggs - representing new life. I liked this very much and encourage you to keep writing in this genre. Easter blessings, Aussie. (you have a real talent)
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
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Well done! Good luck in the contest. You have real story for children beginning with Jesus and what He gave us all. Then you go on to tell the children about the meaning of Easter eggs - representing new life. I liked this very much and encourage you to keep writing in this genre. Easter blessings, Aussie. (you have a real talent)
Comment Written 04-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much. Your supportive words have given me encouragement on a day when I am feeling insecure about my abilities. You are appreciated. Hugs and blessings to you.
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I started on FS 11 yrs ago. Didn't know squat. I am still writing and have won many contests. Love from Australia my new friend. K XX
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello mystery writer.
This is a wonderful Easter poem. I realize it's written as a children's poem, but the explanation of the crucifixion and resurrection is very clear.
You have a message that children can understand and hopefully will be compelled to cling to.
This is an outstanding entry for the contest and I wish you the best of luck.
Robert
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
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Hello mystery writer.
This is a wonderful Easter poem. I realize it's written as a children's poem, but the explanation of the crucifixion and resurrection is very clear.
You have a message that children can understand and hopefully will be compelled to cling to.
This is an outstanding entry for the contest and I wish you the best of luck.
Robert
Comment Written 03-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Robert. I wrote this with my grandchildren in mind, as I do not think they are getting the real story about Easter. I appreciate your comments and six stars, so much! Hugs to you, and blessings always.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a beautiful Easter story filled with colour and hope. A perfect flow here with good rhyming and this is a joy to read. Happy Easter, fine faithful words here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2021
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This is a beautiful Easter story filled with colour and hope. A perfect flow here with good rhyming and this is a joy to read. Happy Easter, fine faithful words here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much! I appreciate your supportive and thoughtful comments and review. Happy Easter to you too. Hugs.
Comment from Wendy G
I like the fact that you have included the essential Easter message, along with the blessings of Spring, rather than focusing on the bunnies. They are just included as an adjunct. Very well written. I hope your entry is a winner.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2021
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I like the fact that you have included the essential Easter message, along with the blessings of Spring, rather than focusing on the bunnies. They are just included as an adjunct. Very well written. I hope your entry is a winner.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2021
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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem. I appreciate your kind and supportive comments. Hugs and blessings.
Comment from Sharon Davis
I absolutely love the presentation details of this children's Easter poem. The brilliant pink background and brightly lit colored eggs enhance the theme of joy and renewal that is very effectively highlighted throughout the piece from start to finish. An enjoyable read with a wonderful theme. Great work!
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2021
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I absolutely love the presentation details of this children's Easter poem. The brilliant pink background and brightly lit colored eggs enhance the theme of joy and renewal that is very effectively highlighted throughout the piece from start to finish. An enjoyable read with a wonderful theme. Great work!
Comment Written 02-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2021
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Thank you so, very much for your supportive and complementary comments, and for the six star rating! It is humbly appreciated. Hugs and blessings to you.
Comment from eliz100
You have definitely met the criteria for an Easter poem for children, and more in my opinion. The flow and rhyming make it an easy read and your message is clear. I like that you chose an upbeat picture.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2021
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You have definitely met the criteria for an Easter poem for children, and more in my opinion. The flow and rhyming make it an easy read and your message is clear. I like that you chose an upbeat picture.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much for your comments and for the stars! It is humbly appreciated. Hugs and blessings to you.
Comment from Kerry L Batchelder
You have successfully combined the true Easter story of salvation with the enjoyment children have at Easter into one beautiful poem. Your words create a mental picture of fresh beginnings. This is very cute and upbeat. I cannot imagine any child not enjoying this poem.
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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2021
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You have successfully combined the true Easter story of salvation with the enjoyment children have at Easter into one beautiful poem. Your words create a mental picture of fresh beginnings. This is very cute and upbeat. I cannot imagine any child not enjoying this poem.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much! Your comments and thoughtful review have lifted my spirits. Hugs and blessings.
