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Lost and Lonely

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Comment from Susan Larson
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Oh, how skillfully you worked in that poem within a poem. It makes me think of cryptic writing that soldiers used to (or maybe still do) use to let their loved ones know where they are or how things are. I love it!

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
    Thank you, once again, for this exceptional rating. The Holy Spirit sends me the words and I just try to keep up. Jan
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This poem speaks after a year CORONA pandemic period, you find yourself lonely and lost, you pray Lord to find your friends and family and peace for you have faith in Him; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
    Thank you so much, ALCREATOR. Jan
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I do believe we need to rely on God more than every right now. Horrible things are happening all over and COVID is a minor part of it. I will leave it at that. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
    I hear you loud and clear, barbara. COVID is just the tip of the iceberg. Jan
Comment from Sally Law
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I completely understand. The vaccines were supposed to allow more freedom, but no, it has not changed. Actually in some places and within companies and air travel, it has become worse. If masks and vaccines worked, then they would work.

Here in Florida, our numbers are down. Church is open and school is open. (There is a county by county mask mandate depending on the population.) Our governor is wonderful and just announced he would not force vaccines. (I can't have a vaccine, so it was an ongoing concern.)

This forced vaccination is starting to look like the yellow star and papers worn about the neck in WW2; something far more nefarious. Tracking? Looks more and more like forced allegiance to the coming Antichrist, and by the looks of things, it's not far off. I'm telling everyone I know to draw close to the Lord and don't waste a day. Love and be loved. You can gathered in small groups, can't you? We do, and see our grandchildren regularly.

I want to go out of this world truly living. Dang it, I'm going to!!

Thank you again for this beautiful poem. Prayers for you now. May God's love and peace rest on you today.
Sal XOs....

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
    Sally: I agree that the Second Coming is soon, and very soon. I intend to live until I die - not die while living. I know you know what I mean. Thanks for all your insights. It's a shame we don't live near each other. I believe we would make great friends. jan
Comment from royowen
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Yes, this is very sound advice to those seeking God's heart and His selfless way of going about things. I've always said, at as a Christian, thst being honest with God. (Inas much as one can, I know my heart is wicked, so I meditate and look at all the angles before I declare God's name in it.) beautifully written Jan, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
    Thanks so much, Roy. I have a good friend who is really angry with God right now. I advise her to tell Him why (although He already knows) as He wants us to share our hearts with Him. Jan
reply by royowen on 01-Apr-2021
    Ask God for, hatred is a one way street, it?s suicide, serves no purpose.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I feel your pain here, I have been alone now for so many months and I miss my family so much. I am praying that I get a flight home soon. Your words here are heartbreaking and I can identify with these words, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 31-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
    Dolly, I pray you get to see your family soon. My daughter lives next door, which is a real blessing; however, not being able to visit my friends and extended family is tough, as you know. Jan
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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I feel exactly like in your poem, and if it was not for God, who knows what will happen tp my soul. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings., please don't gave up, our Lord is watching over us.

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 Comment Written 31-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
    Iza, I will never concede the battle while I have breath. I share these poems that the Holy Spirit gives me in hopes it will help others and to share my faith. Jan