A Sleepy Poet
Rhyming Quatrains53 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
Some of my best stuff comes when my mind is at ease and thoughts drifting. Clearing my mind does wonders for writing. It must be time for a detox. LOL! Going to the swing today...
Sending you my best for this marvelous piece,
Sal XOs....
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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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Some of my best stuff comes when my mind is at ease and thoughts drifting. Clearing my mind does wonders for writing. It must be time for a detox. LOL! Going to the swing today...
Sending you my best for this marvelous piece,
Sal XOs....
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Comment Written 31-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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Oh, I envy you going to the swing. We are expecting T-storms today and I am getting ready for a rainy afternoon. Thanks so much Sally!!
Melissa
Comment from Susan Newell
You succeeded in beguiling me, metered line by metered line. Some poets do write from a point of relaxation while others find their muse in chaos. This is a soft-spoken soothing poem for sure.
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You succeeded in beguiling me, metered line by metered line. Some poets do write from a point of relaxation while others find their muse in chaos. This is a soft-spoken soothing poem for sure.
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Comment Written 31-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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Hello Susan. I am glad you enjoyed it. I like writing in iambic meter... it is my first choice, but I am tempted to write one soon in trochaic which makes my brain think in the opposite way. It is very challenging for me. :). Thanks so much!!
Melissa
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You are most welcome. I'm afraid I'm one of those who writes from the middle of chaos and metered poetry isn't my strong suit. :-)
Comment from 4theloveoftrees
Hello there! I really enjoyed this one, and the artwork of course is so fitting. Nothing better than a lazy afternoon on a hammock reading poetry! I immediately imagine myself in this exact position with your wonderfully descriptive words. Thanks for sharing, well done.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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Hello there! I really enjoyed this one, and the artwork of course is so fitting. Nothing better than a lazy afternoon on a hammock reading poetry! I immediately imagine myself in this exact position with your wonderfully descriptive words. Thanks for sharing, well done.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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Hello Pat. Thanks so very much. I seem to gravitate toward this type of poetry... I am not experienced enough to know if this type of writing has a name.. LOL, but I keep on trying to write of peace. Thanks again, my friend!!
Melissa
