A Sleepy Poet
Rhyming Quatrains53 total reviews
Comment from Irene Medina
This is very good. The rhyming to match and comparisons in detail. How ones words can pull you in like a violin. This caught me. Also the picture used describes the start of your writing.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
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This is very good. The rhyming to match and comparisons in detail. How ones words can pull you in like a violin. This caught me. Also the picture used describes the start of your writing.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
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Hello Irene. Thank you for your lovely review and comments on this verse. I so appreciate it!!
Melissa
Comment from rhonnie69
Hello Sugarray: I thank you for sharing your witty ditty. You,"ARE," a poet. It takes one to know one. Sugarray, I admire your closing line. It is a technique or mine. God bless you, my dear pen-pal buddy. cordially: rhonnie69. P.S. From one poet to another..."Yeast in the Feast."Ha ha ha. Atta girl, Sugarray. Write On.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
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Hello Sugarray: I thank you for sharing your witty ditty. You,"ARE," a poet. It takes one to know one. Sugarray, I admire your closing line. It is a technique or mine. God bless you, my dear pen-pal buddy. cordially: rhonnie69. P.S. From one poet to another..."Yeast in the Feast."Ha ha ha. Atta girl, Sugarray. Write On.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
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Hello Rhonnie. Thank you so much for your fun and witty review. I am delighted that you liked it!!!
Melissa
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Hello Rhonnie. Thank you so much for your fun and witty review. I am delighted that you liked it!!!
Melissa
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That is just what it's like, a poet's words can pull you in and soothe our minds. A soft poem of love, of faith, read gently, is like balm to a wound. This is such a lovely poem, and a real pleasure to read. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
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That is just what it's like, a poet's words can pull you in and soothe our minds. A soft poem of love, of faith, read gently, is like balm to a wound. This is such a lovely poem, and a real pleasure to read. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 01-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
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Hello Sandra. Thank you so much for your lovely comments! They are an encouragement to me :). I am delighted you enjoyed it.
Melissa
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear Sugarray, I often see your name in the Winners Circle, and it is because of poems like this, that I find you there.
But I am aware that you must write many other things, that do not win, so I would like to Fan you, so that I can see everything that you write. I hope that is OK with you.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
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Dear Sugarray, I often see your name in the Winners Circle, and it is because of poems like this, that I find you there.
But I am aware that you must write many other things, that do not win, so I would like to Fan you, so that I can see everything that you write. I hope that is OK with you.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
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Hello Suzanna... you honor and flatter me with your words. I so appreciate your interest. Please fan me, if you wish, I will try to live up to your warm compliments!! Hugs, by the way, you may not know that you can go to the profile of each member and look at their past writing. It is up at the top under Community... find a member... then it is alphabetical. Just so you know. :)
Melissa
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Dear Sr, Thank you for your swift reply and the information. I will have to ask if your name is really Ray, like mine, Or is it just a pseudonym?
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Hello Suzanna... yes, I am Melissa Ray... we live in central Virginia.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
A Sleepy Poet
by Sugarray77
Your poem has a peaceful quality. Excellent Rhyming Quatrains....nice rhythm. Nice alliteration and imagery. Beautiful presentation. The rhymes do not seem forced.
Your poem flows well. The structure makes sense. It draws on emotions. it presents strong images..
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
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A Sleepy Poet
by Sugarray77
Your poem has a peaceful quality. Excellent Rhyming Quatrains....nice rhythm. Nice alliteration and imagery. Beautiful presentation. The rhymes do not seem forced.
Your poem flows well. The structure makes sense. It draws on emotions. it presents strong images..
Comment Written 01-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
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Thanks so much, Gypsy. So glad you liked it and thought it was ok. :). Have a lovely day!
Melissa
Comment from Mrs. KT
Good Morning, Melissa!
What a serene and beautiful offering. Your rhyming quatrains are flawless in form and delivery. But what I appreciate the most is the message of the final stanza:
Her words are chosen carefully,
entrancing you so peacefully,
to shed your angst as you recline,
while she beguiles you line by line.
Thank you for sharing!
Happy Easter!
diane
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
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Good Morning, Melissa!
What a serene and beautiful offering. Your rhyming quatrains are flawless in form and delivery. But what I appreciate the most is the message of the final stanza:
Her words are chosen carefully,
entrancing you so peacefully,
to shed your angst as you recline,
while she beguiles you line by line.
Thank you for sharing!
Happy Easter!
diane
Comment Written 01-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
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Hello Diane. I am delighted you liked this poem!!!!! I always value your opinion above others. I am glad you shared your favorite stanza... it was the ..reveal.. in this verse. Hugs!!
Melissa
Comment from George 1
"A Sleepy Poet" by Sugarray77 tells part of a story with flowing lines and comfortable rhyming in quatrains, but it seems like another stanza is needed to bring it to completion.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
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"A Sleepy Poet" by Sugarray77 tells part of a story with flowing lines and comfortable rhyming in quatrains, but it seems like another stanza is needed to bring it to completion.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
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Thank you George. I really appreciate your suggestion for another stanza. Perhaps my new poem that I just posted will meet with your approval... it has more stanzas. So glad you liked it.
Melissa
Comment from Goodadvicechan
This picture reminds me, in 2019, I was in a cruise and I slept exactly like the picture on a beach in a hidden corner behind a hut... I nearly missed the ship. My daughter went around the whole beach to look for me. We were the last two to board...
I wish I can hear a sleeping poet yo help me to sleep because since I am home-prisoned, I cannot sleep well and I have nightmares...
Thanks for sharing this with us,
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
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This picture reminds me, in 2019, I was in a cruise and I slept exactly like the picture on a beach in a hidden corner behind a hut... I nearly missed the ship. My daughter went around the whole beach to look for me. We were the last two to board...
I wish I can hear a sleeping poet yo help me to sleep because since I am home-prisoned, I cannot sleep well and I have nightmares...
Thanks for sharing this with us,
Comment Written 01-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
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Hello Chan. Thank you for your lovely review. Perhaps you might look through my portfolio that you can find under my name and read some more verses that might help you find peace. Hope so!! Thanks again.
Melissa
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Lovely imagery--fresh phrasing in graceful flow and fine rhyme--evocative of total immersion in the world of poetry--apropos for both reading and writing. Delightful.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
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Lovely imagery--fresh phrasing in graceful flow and fine rhyme--evocative of total immersion in the world of poetry--apropos for both reading and writing. Delightful.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
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Hello Liz! Thanks so very much for your lovely review!!
Melissa
Comment from Jesse James Doty
These are excellent quatrains. The artwork is lovely too. I love the title, "A Sleepy Poet." Is it perhaps biographical of this author? You represent this so well, I can't help wondering if you have laid in that wonderful hammock and dosed away, dreaming of poetic lines to form in just this way. Or, is this just a passing thought that wedged itself into your mind, finding ways, to make a dream come true for you? Either way, you do a fine job with this piece.
Take care,
Jesse
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
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These are excellent quatrains. The artwork is lovely too. I love the title, "A Sleepy Poet." Is it perhaps biographical of this author? You represent this so well, I can't help wondering if you have laid in that wonderful hammock and dosed away, dreaming of poetic lines to form in just this way. Or, is this just a passing thought that wedged itself into your mind, finding ways, to make a dream come true for you? Either way, you do a fine job with this piece.
Take care,
Jesse
Comment Written 01-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
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Hi Jesse. I do my best work reclining in a hammock... just kidding... it is very chilly outside here in central Virginia. :). Thank you so much for your lovely comments.
Melissa
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Good morning, Melissa.
How about in the summer? Do you have a hammock to lie in, at least during the summer months?
You are very welcome. I am happy you liked my review with its veritable comments.
It is almost the weekend, and it is supposed to be gorgeous, have a wonderful weekend, my friend!
Jesse
