"Restorative Appeal"
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Comment from Kerry L Batchelder
This poem is strikingly unusual and captivating. It sounds as though one has gone through great turmoil. It also sounds as though this person has come close to death, but has survived. I look forward to the next poem to see where this goes.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
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This poem is strikingly unusual and captivating. It sounds as though one has gone through great turmoil. It also sounds as though this person has come close to death, but has survived. I look forward to the next poem to see where this goes.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
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Thank you Kerry for your review and kind words.
Doctor Ricky1024
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I like this passage it's so poetic: "There's a gentle rain now coming from above as I look out my window of pain.
I can see the dancing images.
They trickle forever forward, liquid...
Liquefied...
Petrified am Eye!
Can't you stop my forever cry?" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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I like this passage it's so poetic: "There's a gentle rain now coming from above as I look out my window of pain.
I can see the dancing images.
They trickle forever forward, liquid...
Liquefied...
Petrified am Eye!
Can't you stop my forever cry?" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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I hope you enjoyed this one Iza
I got the idea from a movie entitled, "Pepperminret'
In the movie, the actress Jennifer Garner.
Lost her husband and her daughter you too an assassination
And, you feel pain when you suddenly lose something like that.
Doctor Ricky1024
