Haiku 2021
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Refreshment"Haiku Club Submissions 2021
20 total reviews
Comment from Sharon Davis
Wow...great mental image is created in this haiku. The poem is nicely packaged with an image that mirrors the words of the piece. Thanks for sharing your work.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
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Wow...great mental image is created in this haiku. The poem is nicely packaged with an image that mirrors the words of the piece. Thanks for sharing your work.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
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Thank you so much, Sharon, for your lovely feedback. I appreciate it. Best wishes. Debra :)
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
What an amazing photo, I always enjoyed watching David Attenborough's nature programs. Your poem goes with it so well, I can almost hear the buzzing and humming, lol. Loved this one, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
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What an amazing photo, I always enjoyed watching David Attenborough's nature programs. Your poem goes with it so well, I can almost hear the buzzing and humming, lol. Loved this one, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 31-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2021
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Hi Sandra :) Thank you for your lovely feedback!
Best wishes, Debra x
Comment from Lulube
Thirsting for harmony with great imagery. The unexpected company doesn't skip a beat but adds to the melody that has been buzzing along
great fun
lulube
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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Thirsting for harmony with great imagery. The unexpected company doesn't skip a beat but adds to the melody that has been buzzing along
great fun
lulube
Comment Written 31-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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Hey Lulube :) Thanks for your super feedback!
Best wishes, Debra x
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welcome
lulube
Comment from Gloria ....
What an amazing photograph. To see them as musicians is just perfect, and sharing in some nectar of the gods too!
Great job with this fine poem, Debra. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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What an amazing photograph. To see them as musicians is just perfect, and sharing in some nectar of the gods too!
Great job with this fine poem, Debra. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 30-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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Hello Gloria :)
Thank you so much for your lovely feedback.
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from AnnaLinda
Debra,
This is an adorable 5/7/5 contribution poem you have penned.
Very descriptive imagery ~ fun use of "watering hole" and your
last line is buzzing with excitement!
I like your "tiny musicians" analogy and the alliteration there.
What a great photo choice as well. You are very talented!
Anna
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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Debra,
This is an adorable 5/7/5 contribution poem you have penned.
Very descriptive imagery ~ fun use of "watering hole" and your
last line is buzzing with excitement!
I like your "tiny musicians" analogy and the alliteration there.
What a great photo choice as well. You are very talented!
Anna
Comment Written 30-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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Hello Anna :)
Thank you so much for your lovely feedback.
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Wendy G
This is lovely. Your image is just beautiful, and your words in this gentle poem, with musical tones are all well chosen. It's a great entry for the Haiku Club.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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This is lovely. Your image is just beautiful, and your words in this gentle poem, with musical tones are all well chosen. It's a great entry for the Haiku Club.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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Hello Wendy :)
Thank you so much for your lovely feedback.
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from lyenochka
That's so adorable! I've never known hummingbirds to share with any other hummer but it's so cool that they will share with bees! Love how you use their sounds as music in your poem. In French, hummingbird is oiseau-mouche (bird-fly) and in Korean it's bul-sae (bee-bird).
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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That's so adorable! I've never known hummingbirds to share with any other hummer but it's so cool that they will share with bees! Love how you use their sounds as music in your poem. In French, hummingbird is oiseau-mouche (bird-fly) and in Korean it's bul-sae (bee-bird).
Comment Written 30-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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Hello Helen :)
Thank you so much for your lovely feedback.
Thanks for sharing those little nuggets of information - I love stuff like that!
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Isn't it amazing to see such harmony here in this picture and your accompanying words bring together the symphony here, I heard the music, much enjoyed Debra, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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Isn't it amazing to see such harmony here in this picture and your accompanying words bring together the symphony here, I heard the music, much enjoyed Debra, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much, Dolly :) I appreciate your lovely feedback. Best wishes, Debra
Comment from robyn corum
Debra,
WOW! That is an amazing image! Sometimes these photographers really kill me - HOW do they do it? They have to just be in the exact right place in the right time. WOW.
But, on the other hand, your poem is a great accompaniment to this image. What fun! I think the photographer would be very pleased. I wish there was so way you could send this to him/her. Thanks!
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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Debra,
WOW! That is an amazing image! Sometimes these photographers really kill me - HOW do they do it? They have to just be in the exact right place in the right time. WOW.
But, on the other hand, your poem is a great accompaniment to this image. What fun! I think the photographer would be very pleased. I wish there was so way you could send this to him/her. Thanks!
Comment Written 30-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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Hi Robyn :)
Thanks so much for your great feedback. Much appreciated as always. Sending my best wishes, Debra
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Charming whimsy--you nailed the title. Brilliant choice of dual-meaning words--thanks for making it clear for those of us who are not metaphorically-minded!
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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Charming whimsy--you nailed the title. Brilliant choice of dual-meaning words--thanks for making it clear for those of us who are not metaphorically-minded!
Comment Written 30-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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LOL! Thanks, Liz :)
Best wishes, Debra
