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Comment from MaggieLouise
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Excellent conveyance of mood. I could feel the ticking of the clock hands as I read. Time. That bastard. I really enjoyed this one. I like the pov you used too.

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2021

reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
    thankyou
Comment from Debra White
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Hello :)

I enjoyed reading this.

You haven't categorised it as biographical, but still, I felt my radar perk up with curiosity!

Sometimes we just click with people we run into online, especially if we have a shared interest. But then the real word calls, we leave for a while, and then return...to find that our online buddy has vanished!
I love the last line - it hints at the dynamics of the 'relationship.'
Hope Fluff turns up :)

Best wishes, Debra

For consideration - 'I noticed you have (haven't?) written since October...'

' Your age was never a factor before because are (our) spirits were on fire together.'

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2021

reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
    thank you
Comment from oliver818
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This is a nice poem, I enjoyed reading it. I like the voice you gave the narrator, it's very unique.

One spag-
You wrote are spirits- did you mean our spirits?

Thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2021

reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
    thank you