Time Passes
Time will always rule.11 total reviews
Comment from amada
This is a great, superb 6 words poem. I stop to think how can only six very common words can tell such a rebeletion, or we knew it all along, but it got hidden in the back of our mind. A great reminder.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2021
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This is a great, superb 6 words poem. I stop to think how can only six very common words can tell such a rebeletion, or we knew it all along, but it got hidden in the back of our mind. A great reminder.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
That is for sure! I am amazed everyday at how fast time goes. I think something happened last year, but it was 3 yrs ago. Even with the boredom of being locked down and unable to go places, time still goes fast. Well done. Hope you do great in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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That is for sure! I am amazed everyday at how fast time goes. I think something happened last year, but it was 3 yrs ago. Even with the boredom of being locked down and unable to go places, time still goes fast. Well done. Hope you do great in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from nomi338
The funny thing about time is, you can pass it, you can watch it as it goes by, you can chase it, or you can march along with it. What you can not do is, you can not reverse it, you can not slow it down or speed it up. In fact you can only really go along with it. In the end it is really just about time.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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The funny thing about time is, you can pass it, you can watch it as it goes by, you can chase it, or you can march along with it. What you can not do is, you can not reverse it, you can not slow it down or speed it up. In fact you can only really go along with it. In the end it is really just about time.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Sugarray77
Hello Raul. I really enjoyed reading this wonderfully constructed verse that is full of meaning and is a theme we can all relate to. You have done a very good job in construction of this short one. Well done.
Melissa
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Hello Raul. I really enjoyed reading this wonderfully constructed verse that is full of meaning and is a theme we can all relate to. You have done a very good job in construction of this short one. Well done.
Melissa
Comment Written 29-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from AnnaLinda
Hi Raul,
I love the theme of time and you have nailed it here with your 6 word poem entry.
Really great presentation and message.
Best wishes in the contest!
Anna
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Hi Raul,
I love the theme of time and you have nailed it here with your 6 word poem entry.
Really great presentation and message.
Best wishes in the contest!
Anna
Comment Written 28-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written poem. You did an awesome job with it. Excellent photo to compliment your words as well. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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This is a nicely written poem. You did an awesome job with it. Excellent photo to compliment your words as well. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from lyenochka
So true! Those of us who have been blessed to live to see our grandchildren can really see that time passes - fast! And it waits for no one. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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So true! Those of us who have been blessed to live to see our grandchildren can really see that time passes - fast! And it waits for no one. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 28-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Time will always rule.
Time Passes
by Raul1
Hello, Raul,
Excellent entry for the 6 words contest. Good word count and connection between lines. Nice presentation. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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Time will always rule.
Time Passes
by Raul1
Hello, Raul,
Excellent entry for the 6 words contest. Good word count and connection between lines. Nice presentation. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from palmart
Great six-word poem, Raul1!! You described a reality that sometimes we do not realize but it is happening "all the time". Picture you have chosen is definitively graphical of what you describe in words, Wish you good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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Great six-word poem, Raul1!! You described a reality that sometimes we do not realize but it is happening "all the time". Picture you have chosen is definitively graphical of what you describe in words, Wish you good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 28-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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Thank you!
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You´re welcome!
Comment from royowen
Time and tide, as they say, waits for no man, and in my experience, positively gallops towards its next disaster, I'm so glad I'm under God's wings who knowsvthe end from the beginning, well done, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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Time and tide, as they say, waits for no man, and in my experience, positively gallops towards its next disaster, I'm so glad I'm under God's wings who knowsvthe end from the beginning, well done, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 28-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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Thank you!
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Well done
