Sorrow
Loss of a love is difficult to endure.3 total reviews
Comment from Mark D. R.
Harry,
Both artwork and verse earn a six! Of course, your alliterations just add to the essence of your poem entry AND in just six words! Swarmed is just a perfect expression for his sorrow and the sadness of her departure from his life.
Mark
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Harry,
Both artwork and verse earn a six! Of course, your alliterations just add to the essence of your poem entry AND in just six words! Swarmed is just a perfect expression for his sorrow and the sadness of her departure from his life.
Mark
Comment Written 29-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Thank you again for the read and six star review.
Comment from Susan Newell
I like this one. I like the alliteration and imagery of "sorrow swarmed his soul." It is a very succinct way of expressing how people become drowned in grief and have little room for anything else.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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I like this one. I like the alliteration and imagery of "sorrow swarmed his soul." It is a very succinct way of expressing how people become drowned in grief and have little room for anything else.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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Thank you for the read and review. Comments much appreciated.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Susan Louise Gabriel
You really did a good job selecting artwork that was a perfect accompaniment to your eloquent poem! You said so much in just six words.
Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Susan
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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You really did a good job selecting artwork that was a perfect accompaniment to your eloquent poem! You said so much in just six words.
Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Susan
Comment Written 28-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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Thank you for the read and review. Comments much appreciated.
