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Perseverance

flower or weed

43 total reviews 
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
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This is such a lovely poem.
A flower that may not be as beautiful, and isn't as graceful as the others, has a right to be and fights for it.
I am really touched by your work! (I'm sorry I can't give it 5 stars. Really. I used them all up).
Good luck in the contest.
Blessings,
Cindy

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
    Thank you for your wonderful review Cindy. I really appreciate your kind comments.

    Blessings and Happy Easter.
    Janet
reply by Cindy Decker 2 on 29-Mar-2021
    Happy Easter, Janet
    Cindy
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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I love dandelions and don't even like to refer to them as weeds. Your lovely, descriptive poem conveys an uplifting message about the tenacity of the underdog. (check title, spelling)

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
    Thank you Janice for your wonderful review. Thank you too for catching my misspelling. I greatly appreciate it.

    Blessings and Happy Easter.
    Janet
Comment from Jesse James Doty
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Janet, this is lovely! I love the dandelion and wrote a long time ago about this magnificent plant and its mistaken identity as a 'weed.' Your poem's flow is "like butter," and the rhymes are super too! I love your author's notes that speak of Adewpearl as I remember her as well! Thank you for putting away the notion of this humble flower's fate as a 'weed.'
Jesse


 Comment Written 26-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
    Thank you Jesse for your wonderful review. I greatly appreciate your kind comments.

    Blessings and Happy Easter.
    Janet
reply by Jesse James Doty on 29-Mar-2021
    Good morning, Janet!
    It is nice to be appreciated.
    Have a wonderful Easter, as well!
    Jesse
Comment from dragonpoet
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Yes, the dandelion is one of the most tenacious and prettiest weeds. If you are able to call weeds, pretty. I wish it wasn't so prolific.
I miss Brooke's poetry too.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
    Thank you for your wonderful review Joan. They truly are prolific.

    Blessings
    Janet
reply by dragonpoet on 29-Mar-2021
    No problem, Janet.
    Joan
Comment from Anne Johnston
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Thank you for sharing this poem about the dandelion. I know everyone regards them as weeds and a nuisance, but I welcome there bright spot of colour first thing in the spring. Very well written.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
    Thank you Anne for you wronderful review. They truly are prolific and a welcome to spring.

    Blessings
    Janet
reply by Anne Johnston on 29-Mar-2021
    You are very welcome, Janet
Comment from harmony13
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The author's words are uplifting, lovely and creative. The author's words
are filled with meaning. I especially loved the last stanza. Thank you for
the author's notes - I miss Brooke too she was my first reviewer. The poem flows and connect well. The artwork is bright and pretty.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
    Thank you for your wonderful review. Yes, Brooke was so encouraging.

    Blessings
    Janet
Comment from royowen
Exceptional
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This would match what Brooke wrote and then some Janet, yes we all miss her, this lady of words who was stolen from us suddenly. You've written that well known rhyme and perfect meter thst she was renowned, a brought back a memory. Well done, here's to dandelion salad, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
    Thank you Roy for your wonderful review and the special stars. I'm glad it brought back a memory. Brooke was a grand lady.

    Blessings
    Janet
reply by royowen on 29-Mar-2021
    Good job
Comment from karenina
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Love this! When I was taking a walk, some fifteen years ago, with my first grandchild, newly toddling on wavering legs, she suddenly stopped in the field where we were meandering, eyes big as saucers...and bent (with some difficulty so as not to give way to gravity)--and plucked a dandelion.

I watched as she brought it up to her nose, as her pudgy little fingers felt the wonder-flower she beheld.

It was that day I thanked God for the beauty of Dandelions...

I saw the beauty through the eyes of a child and it was ever transformed from a weed to a wonder!

Karenina


 Comment Written 26-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
    Thank you Karenina for your wonderful review. Dandelions from a little ones' hands are a real blessing.

    Blessings
    Janet
reply by karenina on 31-Mar-2021
    Thank you Janet. A pleasure to read your work--Karenina
Comment from Sally Law
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They are quite beautiful and I'm so thankful that you posted one with your lovely poem today. I thought that may be what this is about when I saw the name. Thank you for this offering, and a yellow one! I miss Brooke too, and so glad you reminded us of her, as well.
Sending along my best to you and yours,
Sally XOs...

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
    Thank you Sally for your wonderful review. Brooke truly was a grand lady.

    Blessings and best to you as well,
    Janet
Comment from AJ McCall
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I absolutely love the picture...

It matches the poem beautifully and the rhythming flows easily. I was that kid that liked to pick any kinda flower that looked pretty. Even the 'skunk' flowers. But the dandelion is such a beautiful flower. Well done.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
    Thank you for your wonderful review. They truly are prolific and seem to grow everywhere.

    Blessings
    Janet
reply by AJ McCall on 29-Mar-2021
    You're very welcome. :)