Blessed Mother
New Beginnings15 total reviews
Comment from AnnaLinda
Kay,
You have written a really wonderful poem about Mary and our Lord.
Many biblical points you've expressed in fine poetic form. Good
imagery in these lines:
"Thirty-three years on this Earth
Standing at the Cross tears fell"
Nice how you've mentioned the resurrection and eternal life in the end of
your poem. This makes for a very good contribution to that club and
topic of Mary.
Anna
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
  |
Kay,
You have written a really wonderful poem about Mary and our Lord.
Many biblical points you've expressed in fine poetic form. Good
imagery in these lines:
"Thirty-three years on this Earth
Standing at the Cross tears fell"
Nice how you've mentioned the resurrection and eternal life in the end of
your poem. This makes for a very good contribution to that club and
topic of Mary.
Anna
Comment Written 26-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
-
Hello Anna, Thank you for reading, glad you enjoyed. Love, Kay xx
-
You're welcome;)
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Your poem it's so in tone with the celebration of the Annunciation: "
A lowly woman chosen by God
To carry His Son to save all men
She was a vessel for God's love
Born in a manger, Mary birthed Jesus" Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
|
Your poem it's so in tone with the celebration of the Annunciation: "
A lowly woman chosen by God
To carry His Son to save all men
She was a vessel for God's love
Born in a manger, Mary birthed Jesus" Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
-
He is our hope, a very present help in danger. This world needs Him more than ever in these dark days. "Prayer is the World's greatest wireless connection." Blessings, Kay xx
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and very true poem you have penned about Mary, the mother of God for the club. You used very good and very truthful words and very nice imagery. Thank you so much for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
|
This is a very beautiful and very true poem you have penned about Mary, the mother of God for the club. You used very good and very truthful words and very nice imagery. Thank you so much for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 26-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
-
Hello Teri, Well, you got me started by joining the club. I love you too. Blessings, Kay XX
Comment from eliz100
This is a beautiful poem about the Blessed Mother. You did a good job describing Jesus's life from the perspective of his mother. The picture you chose matches the words of your poem.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
|
This is a beautiful poem about the Blessed Mother. You did a good job describing Jesus's life from the perspective of his mother. The picture you chose matches the words of your poem.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
-
Hello new friend. Thank you for reading and we need the love of the Holy Family more than ever. Blessings, Kay xx
Comment from Sharon Davis
A beautifully written and presented spiritual piece. The message of new beginnings is effectively conveyed to the reader, and the image chosen supports it well
Thanks for sharing.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
|
A beautifully written and presented spiritual piece. The message of new beginnings is effectively conveyed to the reader, and the image chosen supports it well
Thanks for sharing.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
-
Hello Sharon, Thank you so much for reading. Easter isn't about chocolate. The Lord and His mother are so needed today. Blessings, Kay XX
