Blessed Mother
New Beginnings15 total reviews
Comment from mermaids
You have created a beautiful poem about Mary, mother of God. There is a spiritual feel and flow to your words that takes the reader to another place."She saw Him lifted up to heaven" is a wonderful line that gives the reader good feelings.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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You have created a beautiful poem about Mary, mother of God. There is a spiritual feel and flow to your words that takes the reader to another place."She saw Him lifted up to heaven" is a wonderful line that gives the reader good feelings.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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I try to bring the story to life. I'm not religious as such - have a very strong faith and I am a 'sensitive' you will have to google that one!
love, K XX
Comment from LJbutterfly
Thank you Aussie for this timely reminder of the message of the Blessed Mother Mary...Jesus came not to condemn the world, but to save the world that we all could be free from sin and eternal death. This is a spiritually motivated well written poem. Well done.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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Thank you Aussie for this timely reminder of the message of the Blessed Mother Mary...Jesus came not to condemn the world, but to save the world that we all could be free from sin and eternal death. This is a spiritually motivated well written poem. Well done.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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Hello friend, thanks so much for reading and glad you enjoyed. Blessings, K XXHello
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello Kace, this is a lovely entry to the club event. We tend to forget that Jesus was born of an earthly woman. You have written a lovely story from the mother's point of view. She had, like any other mother, love for her child.. Love your story - warm wishes, good luck , Love Dorothy x
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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Hello Kace, this is a lovely entry to the club event. We tend to forget that Jesus was born of an earthly woman. You have written a lovely story from the mother's point of view. She had, like any other mother, love for her child.. Love your story - warm wishes, good luck , Love Dorothy x
Comment Written 27-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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Hello Dorothy, Thank you for your kind comments. More than ever we need the love and hope that Jesus offers. Love, Kay xx
Comment from RGstar
What a lovely write Aussie. Such simpleness and clarity fitting for the subject matter at hand.
Yes, we know the story, and we know the event, told a million times, but I could read this a few times, so beautifully written, with care attached to someone who really cares...the writer.
Bravo.
A lovely thing.
Have a beautiful day. This offer is calming indeed.
My best wishes.
RG
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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What a lovely write Aussie. Such simpleness and clarity fitting for the subject matter at hand.
Yes, we know the story, and we know the event, told a million times, but I could read this a few times, so beautifully written, with care attached to someone who really cares...the writer.
Bravo.
A lovely thing.
Have a beautiful day. This offer is calming indeed.
My best wishes.
RG
Comment Written 27-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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Hello RG, Without love we are nothing. God and the Holy family offer unconditional love if folks will only turn back and ask for forgiveness they would be so much happier in the arms of Jesus. Bless you my friend. Love, Kay XX
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You told the bible story here and with Easter approaching we remember the events in the bible clearly and celebrate the third day, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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You told the bible story here and with Easter approaching we remember the events in the bible clearly and celebrate the third day, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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Hello Dolly-peg, Thank you for reading and Easter is the holiest three days on the calendar. I aim to get His love out into cyberspace, so many people are afraid and hurting. Bless you my friend. K XX
Comment from Gloria ....
This is a fine contribution to the God in Your Life, club K.
Speaking of the resurrection and the superb and uplifting imagery makes this a fine and timely read today. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
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This is a fine contribution to the God in Your Life, club K.
Speaking of the resurrection and the superb and uplifting imagery makes this a fine and timely read today. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 26-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
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Thank you Gloria. Easter is not about chocolates. More than ever now we need the love of God and His blessed Mother. Love, K XX
Comment from GracieAnn
Well done with meaningful imagery. Hits home with every mother. Emotions rise both in the positive vein and in the negative vein of loss of a child. GracieAnne :)
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
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Well done with meaningful imagery. Hits home with every mother. Emotions rise both in the positive vein and in the negative vein of loss of a child. GracieAnne :)
Comment Written 26-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
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Hello my friend. Thanks for reading, we need His love more each day in these dark times. Blessings, Kay XX
Comment from aryr
What a wonderful poem, Kace. Your words presented the life of Mary the Mother of Jesus. I loved the picture of the dove and the background color, they brought a sense of peace and calm. Very well done.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
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What a wonderful poem, Kace. Your words presented the life of Mary the Mother of Jesus. I loved the picture of the dove and the background color, they brought a sense of peace and calm. Very well done.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
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Hello my friend, thanks so much for reading and glad you enjoyed. Easter isn't about chocolate eggs! Love, Kay XX
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I agree especially since I am allergic to chocolate lol, you are so welcome Kay.
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Forgive me, I have forgotten your real name! So many people write to me xx
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You are most welcome, Kace. My name is Alie.
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Tanka you Alie :-))
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I really enjoyed this, you are most welcome, Kace.
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Alie, Happy Easter my friend. Love, Kay.
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Happy Easter to you as well, Kay, love Alie.
Comment from royowen
Among the women of God, none was more blessed than Mary, who was ordained of women to bear the Son of the Most High, Jesus, and later, watched her beautiful Son die on the cross for the sins of the man, she was the vessel who was chosen to carry Him for nine months, and watched the angels celebrate on that day. Beautifully written Kay, good job, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
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Among the women of God, none was more blessed than Mary, who was ordained of women to bear the Son of the Most High, Jesus, and later, watched her beautiful Son die on the cross for the sins of the man, she was the vessel who was chosen to carry Him for nine months, and watched the angels celebrate on that day. Beautifully written Kay, good job, blessings Roy
Comment Written 26-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
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Hello Roy, Thank you for reading. More than ever now, we need the love of Jesus and the blessings of His mother. Take care, love Kay XX
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Well done
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your poem about the Lord's mother is moving, descriptive, and reverent.
One thing: Line 4 seems to be saying that Mary was born in a manger. I know what the line means, but it could easily be changed to make the proper statement.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
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Your poem about the Lord's mother is moving, descriptive, and reverent.
One thing: Line 4 seems to be saying that Mary was born in a manger. I know what the line means, but it could easily be changed to make the proper statement.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
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I shall have a look at that my friend. Thanks so much for reading. Blessings, Kay xx "Born in a manger, Mary birthed Jesus"
