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Falling From Grace

America crumbling as a nation

6 total reviews 
Comment from reconciled
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Hello Maam...I
'm Michael
Pleasure to read your love for God and His Country. The fruit of eliminating God from the classroom of our hearts is reaped in great sorrow. I'm glad you're here, you're voice needs to be heard. Love-

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2021
    Michael, What a Lovely think to say. Your words blessed my heart. Thank you for your review and words of encouragement.
Comment from LKG Alexander
Good
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I wonder if you meant sin runs rampant instead of ramped? We can all wish for a return to civility in world. Too many innocent lives lost because of hate and greed.

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
    Thanks
Comment from Xenia Escobar
Excellent
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As Mr. Brown has said, "Shut your mouth and keep on talkin". You captured the current climate so beautifully. Truth in your words for they truly are a weapon if no longer unheard. Good luck in the competition!!

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 25-Mar-2021
    Thank you, Xenia for taking the time to read my work and for the five star review. Much appreciated.
Comment from Sharon Davis
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Your poem supports a clear perspective on what you believe is lacking in American society today. Thank you for sharing your contemporary rhyming poem.

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 25-Mar-2021
    Thanks Sharon for taking the time to read my work and for the five star review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I am sorry to hear of the people's unhappiness in the US and it is a sad state of affairs. The damage that the present Government is in the process of can only be described as destruction of a Nation, I feel for you, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 25-Mar-2021
    Thank you Dolly, you bless me every time you review my work. Yes, it is a heartbreak what America, as a nation, is going through. There is so much I could say on the matter. We as a country, we need to seek God's face, turn from our wicked ways, and pray.
Comment from A Little Bird
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Congratulations on this evocative piece. It seems to me that China is seizing increasingly more power and the western nations are powerless to stop it. Good luck with the competition!

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 25-Mar-2021
    Thank you for taking the time to read my poem. Could you feel the tears and my broken heart? It is the overwhelming concern of most of the country. It lies in the hands of our government. Prayer is the only answer.