I Love a Pick-a-nick
Bring on Summer63 total reviews
Comment from Justin Chopin
Wonderful work with this poem. I enjoyed how you were able to sincerely express the joy and mellowed out excitement of the summer seasons with your piece. Thought the line about nerds watching birds was very funny. Well done.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Wonderful work with this poem. I enjoyed how you were able to sincerely express the joy and mellowed out excitement of the summer seasons with your piece. Thought the line about nerds watching birds was very funny. Well done.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you tasking the time to read and review my poem.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
If I am playing with the bolded words I am geting quite a funny picture; "calm-bread-pick-a nic-grill -birds-sunset:) But I get the gist. Life must be enjoyed with friends and family. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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If I am playing with the bolded words I am geting quite a funny picture; "calm-bread-pick-a nic-grill -birds-sunset:) But I get the gist. Life must be enjoyed with friends and family. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you tasking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Erika Seshadri
This is cute. I, too, love the way yogi bear says picnic. And the the picture you found to go with the poem is absolutely perfect.
Best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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This is cute. I, too, love the way yogi bear says picnic. And the the picture you found to go with the poem is absolutely perfect.
Best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 25-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you tasking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Vanna1
When you said picnic you sounded just like Yogi bear! It was fun and creative. Good presentation. Good rhymes, and I got a visual of a thick slice of bread. Hahaha. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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When you said picnic you sounded just like Yogi bear! It was fun and creative. Good presentation. Good rhymes, and I got a visual of a thick slice of bread. Hahaha. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you tasking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a Very cute and nicely written poem. Awesome photo selection to go with your words as well. Great use of the suggested words. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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This is a Very cute and nicely written poem. Awesome photo selection to go with your words as well. Great use of the suggested words. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you tasking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very good artwork.
-You have a good poem
and have used the words well.
-I like you use of Yogi's
version of pick-a-nic!
-I can hear him saying it.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-A good entry; good luck.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2021
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-Very good artwork.
-You have a good poem
and have used the words well.
-I like you use of Yogi's
version of pick-a-nic!
-I can hear him saying it.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-A good entry; good luck.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2021
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It didn't offer me poetry, I messaged Tom hopefully he'll change it. I appreciate the catch. If I win I should split it with you.
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No, it doesn't offer it. I think it is default to whatever you previously posted. You should be able to scroll to the correct genre as long as it isn't posted. Check it before you put something in.
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I forgot to say you are very welcome, and you don't have to split the winnings if you win:)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This was a fun word. I knew immediately it was Yogi Bear talking. Good job, Mystery Author, incorporating the required words into a fun and pleasing poem. I enjoyed the added bonus of thyme. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2021
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This was a fun word. I knew immediately it was Yogi Bear talking. Good job, Mystery Author, incorporating the required words into a fun and pleasing poem. I enjoyed the added bonus of thyme. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 24-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2021
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Thank you Jan. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Well this will not make literary history and you used every word required, it is, however, a quick and fun read. I agree with using Yogi's pronunciation, it makes the piece more lively.
Good luck in the contest.
Regards,
Mary
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2021
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Well this will not make literary history and you used every word required, it is, however, a quick and fun read. I agree with using Yogi's pronunciation, it makes the piece more lively.
Good luck in the contest.
Regards,
Mary
Comment Written 24-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2021
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Thank you Mary. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Susan Newell
This is a cute entry. I learned a little trick. If you enter a bunch of returns above your text, it will push it all down below the photo so it will display properly and it will be easier to read the rhyme.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2021
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This is a cute entry. I learned a little trick. If you enter a bunch of returns above your text, it will push it all down below the photo so it will display properly and it will be easier to read the rhyme.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Sharon Davis
A very lighthearted poem that incorporates the required words in a creative and fun way. The artwork chosen pairs nicely. Thanks for sharing this piece.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2021
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A very lighthearted poem that incorporates the required words in a creative and fun way. The artwork chosen pairs nicely. Thanks for sharing this piece.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
