Alarm Clocks
I hate to hear that ringing in the morning.6 total reviews
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Wow, such a cute little poem: "
Callous alarm clocks
hands like whips
militant tick-tocks
on power trips
they're cruel
they rule
never stop
tickety-tock
every morning
without warning
alarming blunderbuss
making a fuss
just isn't fair
they don't care
jarring our sleep
until we're asleep
six feet deep " Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest you got my vote:)
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2021
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Wow, such a cute little poem: "
Callous alarm clocks
hands like whips
militant tick-tocks
on power trips
they're cruel
they rule
never stop
tickety-tock
every morning
without warning
alarming blunderbuss
making a fuss
just isn't fair
they don't care
jarring our sleep
until we're asleep
six feet deep " Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest you got my vote:)
Comment Written 25-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your encouraging review.
Comment from LKG Alexander
Isn't our relationship with alarm clocks strange? We buy them, put them beside the bed, program them to wake us, and then we hate them! Cute poem - well done.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2021
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Isn't our relationship with alarm clocks strange? We buy them, put them beside the bed, program them to wake us, and then we hate them! Cute poem - well done.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2021
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What would have made this a five star poem in your judgment.
Comment from Xenia Escobar
This is soooo truueee! Lol
I liked the poem very much, it was funny and definitely relatable.
The picture is a perfect representation of the image you've conveyed.
Good luck in the competition!!
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2021
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This is soooo truueee! Lol
I liked the poem very much, it was funny and definitely relatable.
The picture is a perfect representation of the image you've conveyed.
Good luck in the competition!!
Comment Written 25-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your review and encouraging comments.
Comment from Sharon Davis
A great piece of contemporary satire poetry. The presentation is greatly enhanced with the chosen artwork that supports your poem. Enjoyable to read.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2021
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A great piece of contemporary satire poetry. The presentation is greatly enhanced with the chosen artwork that supports your poem. Enjoyable to read.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2021
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Thanks for the read, review and comments.
Comment from Anne Johnston
Callous alarm clocks
hands like whips
militant tick-tocks
on power trips"
Good entry for this contest. Lines are required length and rhyming is good. We may not like alarm clocks but often we need them.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Callous alarm clocks
hands like whips
militant tick-tocks
on power trips"
Good entry for this contest. Lines are required length and rhyming is good. We may not like alarm clocks but often we need them.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Can't argue with needing them, but don't have to like them. Thanks for your read and review.
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You are welcome
Comment from Susan Newell
Ban all alarm clocks! Bury them instead. This is a clever short-line poem expressing how many people feel about being awakened. I can't relate, because I've never needed on. I like the hands being whips. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Ban all alarm clocks! Bury them instead. This is a clever short-line poem expressing how many people feel about being awakened. I can't relate, because I've never needed on. I like the hands being whips. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Thanks for the read, review and comments.
