Basket of Joy
a 5-7-5 poetic form6 total reviews
Comment from equestrik
I really like this and remember being told this often as a young person. I think you have it right-throw caution to the wind and go for it! All the best to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2021
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I really like this and remember being told this often as a young person. I think you have it right-throw caution to the wind and go for it! All the best to you in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2021
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Thanks so much!
Comment from Anne Johnston
"the joy of putting
all your eggs in one basket...
caution to the wind"
I like your metaphor that taking a big cance is like throwing caution to the wind.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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"the joy of putting
all your eggs in one basket...
caution to the wind"
I like your metaphor that taking a big cance is like throwing caution to the wind.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Thanks so much, Anne. :)
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You are welcome, sorry for the typo, I meant chance, not cance.
Comment from RodG
I really like your poem/picture combo. With Easter coming soon, I can easily picture my 10-year-old granddaughter cramming all the eggs she and Grandma dyed in one basket. Rod
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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I really like your poem/picture combo. With Easter coming soon, I can easily picture my 10-year-old granddaughter cramming all the eggs she and Grandma dyed in one basket. Rod
Comment Written 24-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Thank you Rod!!
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Basket of Joy, has the proper formatting and looks forward to that special time when Easter reaches the kids with fun and mirth.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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This 5-7-5, Basket of Joy, has the proper formatting and looks forward to that special time when Easter reaches the kids with fun and mirth.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Thanks so much, Bill!
Comment from Susan Newell
Such bravery in the face of an old adage! This is very funny. You have created a double thrill -- actually gathering the eggs up to be hoarded, counted and secured, and then risking losing them all at once. You are living on the edge, dear Mystery Writer.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Such bravery in the face of an old adage! This is very funny. You have created a double thrill -- actually gathering the eggs up to be hoarded, counted and secured, and then risking losing them all at once. You are living on the edge, dear Mystery Writer.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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You are too funny, Susan! Thanks bunches!
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You are welcome.
Comment from samandlancelot
I love the visual image and the picture from your words. I like how you took a cliche', threw caution to the winds, and found the joy of taking the risk they say you shouldn't take.
Wonderful!
Patricia
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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I love the visual image and the picture from your words. I like how you took a cliche', threw caution to the winds, and found the joy of taking the risk they say you shouldn't take.
Wonderful!
Patricia
Comment Written 24-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Patricia, thank you for the wonderful review and comments! Hugs!
