wild wild west
a short line poem4 total reviews
Comment from Xenia Escobar
This was an interesting poem. I read it multiple times because once was not enough. It's different, in a good way! I enjoyed reading it. Good luck with the competition!
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
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This was an interesting poem. I read it multiple times because once was not enough. It's different, in a good way! I enjoyed reading it. Good luck with the competition!
Comment Written 25-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
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Man, those guns are killing America. Thanks for the review.
Like lives are hourglasses, all getting smashed too soon, sigh.
Comment from Sharon Davis
A powerful statement of the discontent of today's society. The rhyming scheme chosen works well and aligns with the requirements of the task. Nice visual enhancement.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2021
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A powerful statement of the discontent of today's society. The rhyming scheme chosen works well and aligns with the requirements of the task. Nice visual enhancement.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2021
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Thanks for the thoughtful review. Two mass shootings just this week.
Look at New Zealand. 24 hours after that mosque shooting new laws and protections were put in place.
How can someone with mental issues be allowed to purchase a gun?
It has gotten out of control. Stay safe, j
Comment from Sharon Davis
A powerful statement of the discontent of today's society. The rhyming scheme chosen works well and aligns with the requirements of the task. Nice visual enhancement.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2021
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A powerful statement of the discontent of today's society. The rhyming scheme chosen works well and aligns with the requirements of the task. Nice visual enhancement.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2021
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your review came twice so ..thank you, thank you
Comment from Talia Shilling Rabin
Very interesting and well written! What is it about? Just the Wild West? Also what time period did this take place in? I love your rhymes and words that you chose!
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2021
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Very interesting and well written! What is it about? Just the Wild West? Also what time period did this take place in? I love your rhymes and words that you chose!
Comment Written 23-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2021
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The time is now. America is turning into a dangerous place to live. Two mass shootings just this week. I say broken hourglass because he killed them before the sand ran out naturally.
Sweeping the sand with cold dead hands is from the NRA expression, you can have my gun when you pry it from my cold dead hands. Thanks for the review and welcome to Fanstory. I look forward to sharing our poems. Where do you live? Cheers, j
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Thank you for explaining that to me! I live in Utah.
