Comment from royowen

Exceptional

I don't think I've read a complete episode with primarily Manuel and his partner Frank in that total chapter. But they look like they're on top of this, but not entirely so. Manuel is in love, and it's about time, he has someone to love. It will be good if they can shut these experiments down. Beautifully written dear Shana, I like the way, each episode becomes connected. Well done my talented friend, blessings Roy
Typo : Whole hearted(ly) expression.

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2021

Thanks dear friend :)
I'm really enjoying writing about the two detectives, especially Manuel. They have a lot of scenes in this book. I'm glad you enjoyed and thanks so much for catching my typo. You're a rare gem!

Always your fan,
Shana :)

Comment from Cromwell Estes

Good

Great story, and didn't read part one and was still able to follow. Good character development and attention to detail too. All that I would work on is making sure that the story is consistent through all the parts (haven't read the next part yet) but I hope its consistent with this one because it was great.

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2021

Thanks Cromwell Estes :)

Glad you enjoyed the chapter. I do enjoy writing about my two detectives, especially Manuel. In this book, they have a lot of scenes.

Thanks again for your review and kind words.
Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from fm wright

Exceptional

You really handled well the influx of background info on the detectives, giving a more visual and personal view of them. I also liked the way you built up to the chapter's ending. The pictures definitely fit well with this chapter. Coudn't find any typos, just a pleasure in the reading.

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2021

Thanks so much, Faye :) So glad you liked this one. I was worried it was too long. There's a lot going on and my two detectives have their work cut out. LOL!
Thanks again for taking the time to read my chapters and give me helpful feedback.

Hugs,
Shana :)

reply by fm wright on 23-Mar-2021

It was most enjoyable to do so.
Hugs,
Faye

Comment from KyColonel Randal

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this story. I did find it interesting. I was unaware of the werewolf aspect until I read the author notes. The precinct scene reminds me of Blue Bloods; that seem to be the police procedural that comes to mind now when I read these detective stories, that and Criminal Minds.

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2021

Thanks KyColonel Randal :)

Glad you enjoyed the chapter. I do love creating new adventures for my Breedline and two detectives. They are working together to stamp out the bad guys. It's fun to pretend and make up stories.

Sincerely,
Shana :)

reply by KyColonel Randal on 23-Mar-2021

You're welcome!