A perfect Night.
ABC poetry43 total reviews
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Breath-taking! Stunning imagery evocative of a perfect night--aptly titled! Extra credit for managing to convey the scene so gracefully despite the ABCD constraints. Magnificent closer! Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 16-May-2021
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Breath-taking! Stunning imagery evocative of a perfect night--aptly titled! Extra credit for managing to convey the scene so gracefully despite the ABCD constraints. Magnificent closer! Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 17-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 16-May-2021
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Thank you very much .i am sorry for the tardy reply .I was down with Covid.
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Are you OK now?
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Yes. just the fatigue.affects the concentration
Comment from Erika Seshadri
This is so very lovely! I'm really enjoying the creativity of these ABC poems. I expect this one will do well in the contest.
Good luck.
All the best.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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This is so very lovely! I'm really enjoying the creativity of these ABC poems. I expect this one will do well in the contest.
Good luck.
All the best.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much especially for thinking that it might win. But i never win ...Smile
Comment from Vanna1
Million stars? Sounds awkward cause no a or 's. Good presentation. The piece is light and airy. You followed the criteria well. Best of luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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Million stars? Sounds awkward cause no a or 's. Good presentation. The piece is light and airy. You followed the criteria well. Best of luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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Thanks for pointing out that .I have added 'a'.Thanks for dropping by
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are descriptive, interesting and creative. I thought
about those beautiful perfect nights when all as the author describes is visible. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork goes well with this poem.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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The author's words are descriptive, interesting and creative. I thought
about those beautiful perfect nights when all as the author describes is visible. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork goes well with this poem.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much foryour kind words.
Comment from RGstar
Sanku,
beautiful writing.
ABC CBA or any form, the writing is the key ingredient, and this is as calm, as serene and as poetic as they come. If it had been a longer poem, I would have savoured every line.
My best wishes.
Good luck in the competition.
Best wishes.
RG
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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Sanku,
beautiful writing.
ABC CBA or any form, the writing is the key ingredient, and this is as calm, as serene and as poetic as they come. If it had been a longer poem, I would have savoured every line.
My best wishes.
Good luck in the competition.
Best wishes.
RG
Comment Written 24-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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Yes it should have been a little longer.But i just could not write an extra line.Thanks for dropping by.
Comment from Ritasher
I like the tranquility you express, after which, at least for me
(it seems) - something like little a plot twist or the subtle change of mood comes with the "silver hauteur". I had to google the meaning of the latter, though, hahah. So that part accents of just how intense the night's beauty was. Overall, beautiful.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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I like the tranquility you express, after which, at least for me
(it seems) - something like little a plot twist or the subtle change of mood comes with the "silver hauteur". I had to google the meaning of the latter, though, hahah. So that part accents of just how intense the night's beauty was. Overall, beautiful.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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Thank you for this lovely review. The full especially dominated the sky
Comment from rhonnie69
HELLO SANKU: I like this poem in that it's easy, and breezy. It makes one feel cool, calm, and collected. I thank you for sharing. You are appreciated. God bless you. cordially: rhonnie69.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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HELLO SANKU: I like this poem in that it's easy, and breezy. It makes one feel cool, calm, and collected. I thank you for sharing. You are appreciated. God bless you. cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much for dropping by and reading my little piece.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was a lovely ABC poem, and so beautifully told. I've only a virtual six to give you, Sanku, but it really deserves the real thing. Your words are so gentle, and there are so many lovely imagers in them. The birds long gone to their nests. The stars twinkling their homage to the moon, it's all lovely. Well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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That was a lovely ABC poem, and so beautifully told. I've only a virtual six to give you, Sanku, but it really deserves the real thing. Your words are so gentle, and there are so many lovely imagers in them. The birds long gone to their nests. The stars twinkling their homage to the moon, it's all lovely. Well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 24-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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Thank you Sandra for your lovely words and wish for giving six stars.
Moon especially full moon dominated the sky so much that I could think of the word 'hauteur'- Santha.
Comment from Bill Schott
This ABC poem, A Perfect Night, has the proper ABCD acrostic formatting and describes such an awe-inspiring, cloudless evening with the themoon aglow. Nice.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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This ABC poem, A Perfect Night, has the proper ABCD acrostic formatting and describes such an awe-inspiring, cloudless evening with the themoon aglow. Nice.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much.
Comment from June Sargent
What a lovely way to spend an evening. There is something magical about stars sparkling in the night sky. It soothes the soul and heals the spirit. Great entry for the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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What a lovely way to spend an evening. There is something magical about stars sparkling in the night sky. It soothes the soul and heals the spirit. Great entry for the contest.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much.
