Comment from harmony13

Excellent

The author's words are lovely, uplifting, descriptive and creative. This poem was a delight to read. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork goes well with both the theme and words of this poem.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021

Thank you for this great review, I really appreciate it. :)

Comment from Earl Corp

Excellent

You took this prompt to another level with this poem. The only suggestion I would make is to bold the required words so people can see you used them. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021

Thank you for this great review. I know that many do highlight the words, I just don't do that because I think it's fun to look for the words. Thanks again for reading my poem. :)

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This poem, A Perfect Spring Day, uses all the required words and creates a scene where all the best highlights of spring are being brought together for a fine day together. Nice.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021

Thank you for this great review and for taking time to read my poem. :)

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I look forward to those picnics our in the open air, enjoying the warmer weather and the wild life. You brought the scene to life here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021

Thank you for reading, I'm glad you liked it. :)

Comment from Patty Palmer

Excellent

An enjoyable poem to read. Your words are very descriptive and I could picture in my mind exactly what was happening right down to the mosquitos. Good luck with the contest!
Patty

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021

Thanks, I appreciate you reading my poem and for this nice review. :)

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

This is indeed beautiful. You have seamlessly woven the words into the story of the perfect day, and at the same time the love for each other shines through. A winner (in my eyes!)

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2021

Thank you for such a wonderful review, I'm so glad you liked it. :)

Comment from Xenia Escobar

Excellent

I like this one. It was so, fun to read. I laughed a few times. Yall had a feast despite that grill that was like "nope not today". Lol This poem was so fun and romantic. Truly is a perfect spring day with food and the one you love. Good luck in the competition!!

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2021

Thank you for this terrific review, I really appreciate it. :)

Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick

Excellent

This is a nicely written poem. You have made great use of the suggested words. Very well done. Nice photo selection to go with your words as well. Very well done. Good luck in the contest,

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2021

Thank you for this very nice review. :)

Comment from Sharon Davis

Excellent

Your poem tells the story of a lively picnic adventure and incorporates the required words effectively, allowing the piece to flow naturally. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2021

Thank you so much for this nice review, it's very appreciated. :)

Comment from Cass Carlton

Exceptional

This is so sweet and genuine to me. An elderly couple reliving a day in their past when they went for a picnic on a lovely Spring day.They have gone picnicking again and recapture the happiness of that long ago day in their youth. This ticks all my boxes.Well done, well written cheers Cass

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2021

Thank you for this exceptional review and for your kind words....it means a lot to me. Have a blessed day. :)