"Cup of Smiles"
Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "Heartbeats"Poetry at his finest.
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Comment from thoughtgame2
I really don't know where to go with this poem at this time since I see its not ending like most do...but I will say I am very intrigued in what I have read so far about the heart...than for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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I really don't know where to go with this poem at this time since I see its not ending like most do...but I will say I am very intrigued in what I have read so far about the heart...than for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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That's very nice of tou
Comment from LeftHandedScribe
Do you have a nice start to a potentially really compelling story. I'd like a little bit more description about your characters at the start. Right now I'm not sure who they are. Details are your friend.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
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Do you have a nice start to a potentially really compelling story. I'd like a little bit more description about your characters at the start. Right now I'm not sure who they are. Details are your friend.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
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I thank you for your little thought at the end about my life story.
Doctor Ricky1024
Comment from kahpot
"Heartbeats" This story in a poem speaks volumes of the workings and feelings of the human heart, " the heart of a horse" reminds of a horse called Pharlap, now in a museum I enjoyed this journey****kahpot
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
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"Heartbeats" This story in a poem speaks volumes of the workings and feelings of the human heart, " the heart of a horse" reminds of a horse called Pharlap, now in a museum I enjoyed this journey****kahpot
Comment Written 21-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
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Thanks kahoot for your time and review on this one.
Doctor Ricky1024
