Camellias bloom
blank verse40 total reviews
Comment from bhogg
I found this well written and beautifully presented. Free verse, but definitely had a cadence going for it. It is strange how our writing sometimes has a mind of it's own and chooses its own path. Bill
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2021
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I found this well written and beautifully presented. Free verse, but definitely had a cadence going for it. It is strange how our writing sometimes has a mind of it's own and chooses its own path. Bill
Comment Written 21-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2021
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Thank you Bill for your thoughtful and encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from RGstar
I don't think it went the other way. I think it metaphorized into a natural place , for so is love joined at each instant, never needing explanation.
Beautiful the imagery, and beautiful the moment, and moments.
It is so beautiful to get an insight and perspective of another, especially when they are important.
Bravo.
May you have these beautiful moments all life, though in the many forms.
A serene and endearing delivery.
My best.
Have a lovely Sunday.
RG
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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I don't think it went the other way. I think it metaphorized into a natural place , for so is love joined at each instant, never needing explanation.
Beautiful the imagery, and beautiful the moment, and moments.
It is so beautiful to get an insight and perspective of another, especially when they are important.
Bravo.
May you have these beautiful moments all life, though in the many forms.
A serene and endearing delivery.
My best.
Have a lovely Sunday.
RG
Comment Written 21-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Thank you for this beautiful review and message. I like the thought that it metaphorized into a natural place. It did feel natural when it was finished. Thank you too for the special sixth star. Your comments mean the world to me.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Mrs. KT
Good Morning, Janet!
Such a peaceful, yet poignant offering. I enjoyed all of the nature references, especially the images in this stanza:
A Cherry blossom falls across my path.
Another branch of flowers cascade(s) down. (Because branch is singular.)
At evensong, a robin sweetly sings
while daylight fades into the hues of night.
Thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Good Morning, Janet!
Such a peaceful, yet poignant offering. I enjoyed all of the nature references, especially the images in this stanza:
A Cherry blossom falls across my path.
Another branch of flowers cascade(s) down. (Because branch is singular.)
At evensong, a robin sweetly sings
while daylight fades into the hues of night.
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 21-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your encouraging review. I always appreciate hearing from you and your thoughtful comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and
presentation, Janet.
-Your notes are appreciated;
I think writing does that
once in a while.
-You wrote a very
good poem with vivid imagery.
-I like how you weave the
nature imagery with events
in your life and relationship.
-I like the pleasant tone of
the poem, especially in the
last two verses.
-I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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-Very nice image and
presentation, Janet.
-Your notes are appreciated;
I think writing does that
once in a while.
-You wrote a very
good poem with vivid imagery.
-I like how you weave the
nature imagery with events
in your life and relationship.
-I like the pleasant tone of
the poem, especially in the
last two verses.
-I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Thank you Pam for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I always appreciate hearing from you.
Blessings
Janet
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You are very welcome, Janet, I enjoy your writing.
Comment from dragonpoet
Janet,
This sounds like this poem started as an ode to springtime beauty but ended as a poem of mourning for a loved one who died.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2021
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Janet,
This sounds like this poem started as an ode to springtime beauty but ended as a poem of mourning for a loved one who died.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
Comment Written 21-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2021
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Thank you Joan for your thoughtful and encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
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My pleasure, Janet. Have a great week.
Joan
Comment from Abby Wilson-hand
Very beautiful poem my friend, so inviting to long for
a walk in a beautiful garden. You used words that made it sound
so inviting and beautiful. and blessed times
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2021
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Very beautiful poem my friend, so inviting to long for
a walk in a beautiful garden. You used words that made it sound
so inviting and beautiful. and blessed times
Comment Written 21-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2021
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Thank you Abby for your thoughtful and encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from jake cosmos aller
nice poem that starts out as an ode to spring and becomes an ode to love instead. I too often start a poem that starts one way and then does it own thing and ends up somewhere else. who can deny the muse and her desires?
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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nice poem that starts out as an ode to spring and becomes an ode to love instead. I too often start a poem that starts one way and then does it own thing and ends up somewhere else. who can deny the muse and her desires?
Comment Written 21-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Thank you Jake for your thoughtful and encouraging review. You're right, who can deny the muse :))))
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You brought the blooms here and the joy they also bring as nature starts to wake in early spring, a wonderful free-write, much enjoyed, spring is my favourite time of year, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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You brought the blooms here and the joy they also bring as nature starts to wake in early spring, a wonderful free-write, much enjoyed, spring is my favourite time of year, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review. Spring is a beautiful time of year.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Goodadvicechan
I like the flower in the picture. It reminds people of spring time.
This year the winter is too long and cold. Spring time is overdue...
This poem is in time to welcome spring. Like what the poem says: "A Cherry blossom falls across my path. Another branch of flowers cascade down."
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2021
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I like the flower in the picture. It reminds people of spring time.
This year the winter is too long and cold. Spring time is overdue...
This poem is in time to welcome spring. Like what the poem says: "A Cherry blossom falls across my path. Another branch of flowers cascade down."
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Dawn Munro
Blank verse has to be one of the more difficult forms of poetry to master, yet this is exquisite. I remember when Ray (mountainwriter) so kindly took the time to help me learn the format.
I think he would love this as much as I do.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Blank verse has to be one of the more difficult forms of poetry to master, yet this is exquisite. I remember when Ray (mountainwriter) so kindly took the time to help me learn the format.
I think he would love this as much as I do.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review and for the special six stars. Small world, it is Ray (mountainwriter) who taught me blank verse as well.
Blessings
Janet
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It was my pleasure, Janet. :)
