Reviews from
I like to watch autumn leaves as they twirl in the air.
2 total reviews
Comment from
Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and
presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and
comparison of the leaves
to the ballet dancer.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2021
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment.
reply by Pam (respa) on 19-Mar-2021
Comment from
RodG
I know it's early autumn down under in Australia and leaves are just beginning to fall. I like how you compared their falling to a ballerina's movements. The picture certainly helped me visualize this particular one.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2021
Thanks, Rod, for your review and comments. Autumn is only in my head I'm here in Arlington Heights.
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