Comment from royowen

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What a marvellous episode, of course he'll get the promotion at the paper, but will he accept it? Knowing his own situation, Veronica asking Carrie for forgiveness, with the strong way he warned her, and now his therapist calling him, presumably trying to make an appointment with him, but the image she saw?!? Another wonderful writing dear girl, well done, you're an outstanding Talent, blessings Roy
Typo : Her kind and sentiment(al) words...

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2021

Thanks so much, dear friend :)

Thanks for taking the time as you always do to read my chapter. I sure love to hear your feedback. You've been so helpful to me for many years now. I appreciate everything! And thanks for the advice. I will take it! :)
So far, I'm very fatigued, but doing okay. Hopefully I will gain back strength soon.
Always your fan,
Shana :)

reply by royowen on 17-Mar-2021

Good job dear girl

Comment from AJ McCall

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Geeze... Joseph did something to Carrie's boss to make her more 'kind' or 'act better' towards Carrie? I'd say it's a miracle!! This Shadow thing is annoying. I hope Joseph can be rid of it soon so he doesn't have to worry about hurting Carrie. I'm torn apart too! Waiting for the next chapter!!!

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2021

Thanks AJ :)

I just love your comments! You put a big smile on my face this morning. Thanks for the awesome review and feedback.
There is so much going on with my characters, but I promise, they always end with that 'good feeling.' Although I have much more to go with this story, light always wins over darkness.
Thanks again for taking the time to read my chapter. I appreciate you.

Hugs,
Shana :)

reply by AJ McCall on 18-Mar-2021

Aww, you're welcome, Shana!! That means a lot to me for you to say that. I love making people smile, even if it's just by writing my thoughts about their story. And I get it, doesn't all our stories have loads of stuff, lol? You're welcome again!!

Comment from Mistydawn

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That's great that Carries boss apologized and gave her a raise. Guess she just needed to be put in her place. I do hope he can figure out a way to get rid of the shadow so, then he and Carrie can live happily ever after. Your chapter is very well-written, interesting, very realistic from start to finish. Like always, I look forward to reading more.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2021

Thanks so much, Mistydawn :)

Carrie's boss is very lucky to be alive. Thanks to another reader here, I decided to change her fate and let her live. LOL! She just needed to be put in her place. Haha!
There is so much more to the story, but I promise, it will end well.

Thanks again for the great review and awesome feedback!
Hugs,
Shana :)

Comment from fm wright

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Another riveting chapter with pictures to match. I am happy to hear about Xarrie's better treatment by Veronica. I also hope that somehow, someway, Joseph can be rid of the entity inside him. I encountrered no typos. Just a story that wants me coming back for more.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2021

Thanks so much, Faye :)

Yes, Carrie's boss is very lucky her fate changed... thanks to a reader here on FanStory. I was going to end her character, but decided to go another 'less violent' path. LOL!
You and everyone that reads my story is saying the same thing about the Shadow. But you know me, I am all for the fairytale ending to a story.
Thanks again for the awesome review and feedback! :)

Big hugs,
Shana :)

reply by fm wright on 17-Mar-2021

You're welcome. I appreciate the background as to why you changed Veronica's fate. Also your view on your working out of your endings; that is, preference towards the fairytale ones.
Hugs,
Faye