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Peace Worldwide

A Six Word Poem

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Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
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I love your six word poem it is so true
if only others would think like you.
thank you for sharing. sorry so late to answer
I'm slow but sure
Cookie

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2021
    Thank you Miss Cookie, and yes maybe one day we will achieve this****kahpot
reply by Miss Cookie Atkinson on 22-Apr-2021
    Your very welcome, have a blessed day.
    Cookie
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
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It would be great if we could share peace, worldwide. The suggestion is a lovely one. Sometimes it takes quite a while to even find peace within ourselves. But, we must keep trying.

Ralf

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2021

Comment from AnnaLinda
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Kahpot,

I like the way you have stacked your 2 word lines...
You have well chosen words to present your theme of peace...
starting with finding peace "within" and sharing it with the world.

Peace can be hard to find in this world, so might as well
start with oneself. I came on the site to see how full my
inbox was before going to sleep...Saw your name
and popped on it. You did not disappoint. Your presentation
is lovely as well. Thank you for choosing my art. (that was
made many years ago.)

Great job on your 6 word entry,

Anna

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2021
    Thank you very much, and your artwork is wonderful-I looked at quite a few of yours, and yes peace can be very hard to find, s always very much appreciated****kahpot
reply by AnnaLinda on 02-Apr-2021
    Aaw...that's kind of you. More needs to be written about peace.
    I hope you win.

Comment from Suzanna Ray
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Dear kapot, The theme you have picked for this particular contest it's just perfect.
Because when it comes to the subject of true peace, It comes, with only a few wise words. you have stated them here, for everyone to read.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2021
    Thank you very much, yes words can make it look easy but it just doesn't seem to work that way, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from lyenochka
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Wouldn't that be wonderful? If everyone would have deep peace within, receiving peace from God that they can emanate that peace to all those around them! Thanks for this wonderful thought. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
    Thank you, and yes it would be wonderful though we have a long way to go, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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A Six Word Poem
Peace Worldwide
by kahpot

Hello, Kym,

Good word count and connection between lines. Nice presentation. I like the topic... it's very positive. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
    Thank you very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from June Sargent
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You have provided much food for thought in just six words! Peace has to be found within each one of us individually - before we can spread it. Like hatred, love is infectious. And only by replacing hate with love, will we have worldwide peace. Thank you for the timely reminder.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
    Thank you for your very understanding and encouraging comments and review, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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You have made excellent use of six well-chosen words to convey a powerful message. Before we can spread peace and promote unity, we must have peace within. We can't share what we don't have!

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
    Thank you very much, yes peace would be a wonderful thing, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Sharon Davis
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Six powerful words, with a practical directive, one that, if adopted by all, would create such harmony. The only suggestion I would have would be that the artwork and backdrop be lighter, symbolic of a lightening of the burden with increased peace. A powerful message.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
    Thank you very much, your wonderful comments are very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from MAMONIA
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This poem has a lot of meaning in a few words. You managed to send a message to everyone in the world. Peace is a beautiful thing, and it is so important that all of us promote it.
You've done a fine job with this 6-word poem, and I wish you much luck in the contest.
Marie

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
    Thank you for your very encouraging comments and review, very much appreciated****kahpot
reply by MAMONIA on 29-Mar-2021
    You are most welcome.
    Marie
reply by MAMONIA on 29-Mar-2021
    You are most welcome.
    Marie