Trees Blossom
Spring brings forth new life12 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
A beautiful image, and an excellent background both support your very lovely Haiku. I like the image of the trees wakening from winter sleep as if in hibernation. Good wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2021
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A beautiful image, and an excellent background both support your very lovely Haiku. I like the image of the trees wakening from winter sleep as if in hibernation. Good wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2021
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Comment from Susan Louise Gabriel
What a beautiful accompanying photo, and your poem is lovely. By the time I got to the last line, I could smell blossoms. LOL
Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!
Susan
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2021
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What a beautiful accompanying photo, and your poem is lovely. By the time I got to the last line, I could smell blossoms. LOL
Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!
Susan
Comment Written 17-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2021
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Comment from LJbutterfly
This creative and beautifully written poem has delightful imagery describing the onset of spring. The artwork you chose pairs perfectly with your words. Well done. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2021
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This creative and beautifully written poem has delightful imagery describing the onset of spring. The artwork you chose pairs perfectly with your words. Well done. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2021
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Comment from equestrik
Beautiful presentation for the trees in Spring contest. I agree, there is a wonderful scent associated with Spring and all of the renewal of life that takes place.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2021
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Beautiful presentation for the trees in Spring contest. I agree, there is a wonderful scent associated with Spring and all of the renewal of life that takes place.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2021
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Comment from PENofFIRE
What a lovely picture you painted of spring. Your choice of words was perfect. Loved the artwork also, it was a perfect match. Congratulation on winning the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2021
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What a lovely picture you painted of spring. Your choice of words was perfect. Loved the artwork also, it was a perfect match. Congratulation on winning the contest.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2021
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Thank you I didn?t know I won the contest 🙂
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I don?t think the voting is finished until tomorrow!
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
The glory and beauty of the blossoms in Spring are matchless. As if the masterpieces are not enough, they then turn into delicious fruit. What more can we ask for. Really, such treats.
Ralf
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2021
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The glory and beauty of the blossoms in Spring are matchless. As if the masterpieces are not enough, they then turn into delicious fruit. What more can we ask for. Really, such treats.
Ralf
Comment Written 17-Mar-2021
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine spring write filled with the positivity of new life and blossom is such a delightful way to introduce new life to us, much enjoyed and have a great day, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2021
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A fine spring write filled with the positivity of new life and blossom is such a delightful way to introduce new life to us, much enjoyed and have a great day, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Mar-2021
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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your great picture pairs perfectly with your well-chosen words, Mystery Author. Great job with the syllable count per line. Your words flow smoothly, good us of s and b alliteration, and the color scheme is great.
May I suggest
In last line instead of "The", I would use "As." However, I know this is your call. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2021
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Your great picture pairs perfectly with your well-chosen words, Mystery Author. Great job with the syllable count per line. Your words flow smoothly, good us of s and b alliteration, and the color scheme is great.
May I suggest
In last line instead of "The", I would use "As." However, I know this is your call. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 15-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2021
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Comment from Debra White
Hello :)
I enjoyed reading your 5/7/5 poem.
It is well presented, rich in imagery and your use of alliteration is lovely.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes, Debra
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2021
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Hello :)
I enjoyed reading your 5/7/5 poem.
It is well presented, rich in imagery and your use of alliteration is lovely.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes, Debra
Comment Written 15-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2021
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Comment from Pantygynt
This 5-7-5 is a good one. It says it all in the required syllable count covering both the look and the smell of these trees that burgeon at this time of the year.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2021
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This 5-7-5 is a good one. It says it all in the required syllable count covering both the look and the smell of these trees that burgeon at this time of the year.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2021
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