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Remembering Yesterday

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A widow's journey into her relationship with her

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Comment from Ben Colder
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I think Stone mountain is interesting though certain race of people wish it destroyed, Enjoyed another one of your home spun tales. Typical American family.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2021
    Thank you for the review. I hope thing are going well with getting the book ready. As to Stone Mountain, do they want to blow up the mountain for just remove the carvings? I assume they don't care of the Confederates.
reply by Ben Colder on 19-Mar-2021
    Hard to say about ignorance. They are so blind and never realizes that history are the footsteps toward a more secure future. We learn by our mistakes and removing the boundary lines of knowing good from evil is totally idiotic.
Comment from Sankey
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Good read as usual. No spags as far as I could see. I have missed the big bucks this time around but I am stacked up at present, so no worries there. FS wants more for some reason so here goes.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2021
    Thank you for the review and comments and the six stars. I figured you were busy. I saw the cute baby picture on Facebook. I'm sorry you missed the big bucks. I think my script is still paying about the Grim Reapers.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
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So a very active family indeed! Good to see Connie and you are on a better footing. Everyone seems to be finding their own niche, little by little. Christi seems to be the one with the ups and downs. Glen and Carol look to be quite successful. Don is successful in school, but still misfiring with cars.

Ralf

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2021
    Thank you Ralf, I was relieved to have Connie being a loving child again even though he grade hadn't improved that much. Don and Christi were my concerns in this chapter.
    Beth
Comment from AnnaLinda
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Beth,

I really like the way you began this chapter with seeking out good counsel from books and Dr. Dobson and how you learned to stop reacting so strongly and it seemed to help your relationship with Connie.

You really have a good memory! I have to say that I laughed out loud when I read this line:

"Apparently, this was another kind of classic or expensive model that didn't run." LOL

You did a great job on this and I did not see any errors. I thought I saw one place where you had a comma instead of a period...but, now I can't
find it.

Anna

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2021
    Thank Anna, I really appreciate the review and comments. Dr. Dobson's advice was very helpful. When my son got into college he convinced us to loan him money to buy a car. The Firebird came from a junkyard and never ran but he didn't tell us where he was getting it.
    Beth
reply by AnnaLinda on 15-Mar-2021
    ;)
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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I read this last night in bed, but couldn't type my review on the ipad. Too small for me. I really enjoyed this part, Connie is like most teenage girls, we all try it on, but our parents soon knock it out of us by grounding us. Lol. I've never been to America, but would have loved a trip to Disney World, that won't be happening now. My sister has been loads of times, taking her grandchildren and their parents. Lots happening in this part as usual, Beth, another really interesting read. :)) Sandra xxx

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2021
    Thank you for the review and comments. Yes, we all misbehaved as teenagers. I wonder if your sister lives in the US and near are in Florida. Disney world is a magical place. I'll probably never go back but I'm glad i had that opportunity.
Comment from Ulla
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Hi Beth, as always I loved this continuation to your family story.You're certainly having your ups and downs with them all. But Connie seems to be more settled.
and Janice, the girl who helps out in our department, = and Janice, the girl who helped out in our department,
Now what's next. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 14-Mar-2021
    Thank you for the excellent review and comments. I glad your still on the rollercoaster ride with me. Thanks for noticing the wrong tense.
    Beth
Comment from Dick Waters
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I give you lots of credit for doing this. I just lost my x-wife and I don't think I could recall many of the details of our life together.
Family is one of the precious things of life, and your recalling the details for you deceased husband shows how important your family was and is.
Thanks for sharing, and thanks for all of your support.
Dick

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 14-Mar-2021
    Thank you, Dick. I really appreciate the review and comments. My children are thrilled that I'm doing this. I hope the grandchildren will like it. After getting into genealogy, I'd like to know more about what life was like for those who lived before me.
    I really appreciate the six stars. So far my memory is pretty good.
    Beth
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Beth
Your chapter in in your books Remembering Yesterday
Beginning the Year of 1988
I found that you were very busy with moving and worrying about your daughter Connie. Kept me wondering how you could keep up with your family. Smiles you kept my interest.
Gert

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 14-Mar-2021
    Than you Gert. I appreciate you review and comments.
    Beth
reply by Gert sherwood on 14-Mar-2021
    You are most welcome Beth
    Gert
Comment from Judy Lawless
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Beth, you certainly had lots of family adventures! You've created a very detailed account, and have expressed your feelings of love, joy, wariness, and disappointment. Good job.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 14-Mar-2021
    Thank you so much Judy, I appreciate your review and comments.
    Beth
Comment from Suzanna Ray
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Dear Beth, are you sure that you did not keep some kind of diary or journal during these turbulent years when your children were becoming adults?
(because the amount of detail in this chapter alone.)

I might have remembered going to Disneyland but not the year. your memory is phenomenal.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 14-Mar-2021
    I did keep a journal stating in 1987 for two or three years but not before that and not lately. I do have a pretty good memory. Much better than my children's memories. Thanks for the review.
    Beth