Dark and Woeful
About loneliness4 total reviews
Comment from Lyn Peters
This has got to be a contest winner, Monica. Thanks for continuing to share your work with your Fans! I always enjoy your pieces (your work is so honest and clean).
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2021
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This has got to be a contest winner, Monica. Thanks for continuing to share your work with your Fans! I always enjoy your pieces (your work is so honest and clean).
Comment Written 12-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
You nailed loneliness--and the depression that surely ensues--powerful imagery--dragging, clawing are graphically evocative of your desperately trying to escape from the abyss wherein dwells the beast called Loneliness.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2021
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You nailed loneliness--and the depression that surely ensues--powerful imagery--dragging, clawing are graphically evocative of your desperately trying to escape from the abyss wherein dwells the beast called Loneliness.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2021
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Thank you. I always try to write it like it is.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
The poem is sending a very woeful message of loneliness. Message is clear. The person experiencing this needs to wrench their mind away from the sadness and become occupied with helping someone else. That usually pushes those thoughts away.
Ralf
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2021
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The poem is sending a very woeful message of loneliness. Message is clear. The person experiencing this needs to wrench their mind away from the sadness and become occupied with helping someone else. That usually pushes those thoughts away.
Ralf
Comment Written 11-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2021
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Thank you, Ralf. Always good to hear from you.
Comment from kahpot
I am not a tanka expert (so my review is about the words and not rules) I like the use of loneliness twice, if I had to suggest any thing it would be to center your words, which to me are very meaningful best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2021
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I am not a tanka expert (so my review is about the words and not rules) I like the use of loneliness twice, if I had to suggest any thing it would be to center your words, which to me are very meaningful best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 11-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much for the wonderful rating. I truly appreciate your review, and your suggestion.
