Paradise
My little...17 total reviews
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I love the photo you chose to got with your poem you captured my attention from the first word to the last.
I could sense the joy you and your husband knows that paradise can be any where as long as there love an happiness is there.
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2021
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I love the photo you chose to got with your poem you captured my attention from the first word to the last.
I could sense the joy you and your husband knows that paradise can be any where as long as there love an happiness is there.
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 10-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2021
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It's very true that paradise is wherever your loved ones are. Thank you for this great review. :)
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Your very welcome.
Take care
Cookie
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a wonderful paradise in your own backyard and many people have resorted to making the best of their homes as they are confined to them. You brought some paradise to my eyes here and this is an ideal write for the contest, skilfully written with a delightful sentiment, worthy of six stars, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2021
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This is a wonderful paradise in your own backyard and many people have resorted to making the best of their homes as they are confined to them. You brought some paradise to my eyes here and this is an ideal write for the contest, skilfully written with a delightful sentiment, worthy of six stars, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your kind words and great review...both are appreciated. :)
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This poem speaks happily, clearly and proudly that there is a paradise just at a place near your house, behind your tiki bar stall on roadside and the place behind of which you dance at night; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2021
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This poem speaks happily, clearly and proudly that there is a paradise just at a place near your house, behind your tiki bar stall on roadside and the place behind of which you dance at night; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 09-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2021
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Thank you for this nice review, it's very appreciated. :)
Comment from kahpot
Very well written, your own backyard paradise it sounds wonderfully relaxing, love the photo, and the rhyme in these words, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2021
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Very well written, your own backyard paradise it sounds wonderfully relaxing, love the photo, and the rhyme in these words, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 09-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2021
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Thank you for this great review, I really appreciate it. :)
Comment from eltwelve
Wow, that to me, was very enjoyable to read. It flowed smoothly for easy reading. It made me smile. I would definitely think will resonate with many. Thank you
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2021
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Wow, that to me, was very enjoyable to read. It flowed smoothly for easy reading. It made me smile. I would definitely think will resonate with many. Thank you
Comment Written 09-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2021
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Thank you for this exceptional review, it means a lot to me. I'm so glad you liked it. :)
Comment from jenintorre
I really enjoyed reading this lovely uplifting poem about paradise. It was very atmospheric. I think you have found paradise. Best of luck in the competition. Jen.
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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2021
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I really enjoyed reading this lovely uplifting poem about paradise. It was very atmospheric. I think you have found paradise. Best of luck in the competition. Jen.
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Comment Written 09-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2021
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem. I think anywhere that you're with the ones you love is paradise. Thanks again. :)
Comment from Leann DS
This was a charming idea! I've actually been teased about doing this very same thing for me, as I am totally blind, and my family says "you wouldn't know the difference." Ha ha I do love the idea, and the rhymes in your poem worked well. Best of luck to you in the contest. Hugs.
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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2021
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This was a charming idea! I've actually been teased about doing this very same thing for me, as I am totally blind, and my family says "you wouldn't know the difference." Ha ha I do love the idea, and the rhymes in your poem worked well. Best of luck to you in the contest. Hugs.
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Comment Written 09-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2021
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Thank you for this terrific review, I'm so glad you enjoyed my poem. Have a great evening. :)
