Comment from AJ McCall

Exceptional

I know I haven't reviewed in a while but this?..... Wow. Jena's immortal?! That's awesome! But who are those people and the women? Why do their associates want Jena? I thought it was funny when you said the women were muscular like a bodybuilder, lol. I'll be waiting for that next chapter!

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2021

Aww... thanks AJ :)

I would love to have Jena's abilities! She is definitely fierce and one you don't want to mess with. She's on a mission from God to destroy evil. But unfortunately, she has gotten herself into a pickle. The people who took her are working for an unethical drug company. They are mixing animal and human DNA to create a whole new species. And now that they have discovered what Jena is... things are taking a turn for the worse.

So thrilled you enjoyed! Thanks for the awesome review.
Big hugs,
Shana :)

reply by AJ McCall on 14-Mar-2021

You're welcome! Sorry for the delay! Been busy. I have an idea similar to that, but... my story would take place in the projects.

reply by the author on 15-Mar-2021

Your story sounds interesting. I will have to check it out! Thanks again :)

reply by AJ McCall on 15-Mar-2021

You're welcome! I should've clarified; I have to post it first. :)

Comment from royowen

Exceptional

Boy this is a great new storyline Shana, Jena is now captive to people she sensed were evil, and have hit her with an irresistible tranquilliser that has knocked her out, after taking care of a couple of big girls. What and where are they taking her? It seems that they are up to no good thing. And excellent post, is there any end to your creative abilities? Well done dear girl. Blessings Roy

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021

Thanks so much, dear friend :)

So, so happy you enjoyed this! I wanted to bring in some action for Jena. She's one of my new favorite characters to write about. But she's tough as nails and I think she's up for a challenge. Plus, she's got the Breedline Covenant backing her up.

Thanks for all the kind words and encouragement.
Always your fan,
Shana :)
PS... miss your posts!

reply by royowen on 09-Mar-2021

An excellent character

Comment from Mistydawn

Exceptional

Oh no, not sweet Jenna. The poor thing has been through so much already, discovering who she really is and now this? I do hope she figures out a way to escape before they hurt her or worse. Your chapter is very well-written, interesting from start to finish. You had me on the edge of my seat rooting for Jena, hoping she wouldn't shift in front of the crowd. Like always, I look forward to reading more. I just wish I didn't have to wait a week for your next instalment.

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021

Thanks so much, Mistydawn :)

Yes, Jena is got herself into quite a pickle. But she is tough as nails and also has the Breedline Covenant backing her up. But when Nicolas finds out she's been taken, all hell will break lose. Stay tuned my friend.
Thanks for all your kind words! You make a difference :)

Big hugs,
Shana :)

Comment from fm wright

Exceptional

Oh no, poor Jena. I'm guessing this has something to do with the lab and its unknown associate that was creating werewolf creatures and the like. Despite her abilities I am wondering just what will become of her. Great chapter and wonderful pictures.

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021

Thanks so much, Faye :)

Yes, it seems Jena has got herself in another situation. But she is one tough cookie and she doesn't give up easily. Plus, she has the Breedline Covenant and Nicolas fighting for her.

Thanks again for all your kind and encouraging words. I'm glad you liked the artwork. My cover artist created those.

Big hugs,
Shana :)

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This Chapter of the Supernatural Fiction speaks in continuation a fantastic and interesting story through a solid taletelling, advances with plot development as fostered by dialogues realistic with a curious ending move; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021

Thanks so much, Alcreator :)

Super excited you enjoyed another chapter. I appreciate all your kind words and awesome review. You make a difference!

Sincerely,
Shana :)