Does It Matter?
Working to being a better person is what is important.2 total reviews
Comment from Goodadvicechan
We all lose our memories when we grow old... I am one of them but I totally agree with you: "Does it matter though
If hour by hour, day by day, I'm becoming a better me..."
Read my essay "In Search a better Life." on front page. That is what you mean in your poem... I get better day by day.
Just a minor typo: It is difficult to fine (find) what we want..."
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021
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We all lose our memories when we grow old... I am one of them but I totally agree with you: "Does it matter though
If hour by hour, day by day, I'm becoming a better me..."
Read my essay "In Search a better Life." on front page. That is what you mean in your poem... I get better day by day.
Just a minor typo: It is difficult to fine (find) what we want..."
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021
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Thanks for the read and review and the typo catch. Appreciated
Comment from Susan Newell
This is a very thoughtful Haibun about challenges that face many people as they age. And it can be very challenging when memory is inconsistent. Keep using the brain by writing and using words!
You have a tiny typo: 4th line from the bottom of prose -- difficult to finD
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021
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This is a very thoughtful Haibun about challenges that face many people as they age. And it can be very challenging when memory is inconsistent. Keep using the brain by writing and using words!
You have a tiny typo: 4th line from the bottom of prose -- difficult to finD
Comment Written 07-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021
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Thank you for the read, review and catching the typo. Much appreciated.
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You are welcome.
