Remembering loved ones
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Do not cry for me"It?s so sad when you lose loved ones
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Comment from robyn corum
Joanne,
This is a really sweet poem and a very special idea to offer your friends and family for when the time comes - as it always must. Please print this out and make sure your loved ones know where it is - and it can be read as part of your eulogy! It would have everyone bawling! In a good way, of course.
Notes:
1.) Don't cry for me I(')m in the dewdrops that come with the morning light.
2.) Don't cry for me I'm (I)n the warmth of the summer breeze that softly caresses your skin.
3.) Don't cry for me I've just stepped away for a little while.
--> my FAVORITE line!!!
4.) there is soooo much extra space at the bottom. I think it might help the presentation if you deleted some?
Thanks so much! I enjoyed!
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2021
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Joanne,
This is a really sweet poem and a very special idea to offer your friends and family for when the time comes - as it always must. Please print this out and make sure your loved ones know where it is - and it can be read as part of your eulogy! It would have everyone bawling! In a good way, of course.
Notes:
1.) Don't cry for me I(')m in the dewdrops that come with the morning light.
2.) Don't cry for me I'm (I)n the warmth of the summer breeze that softly caresses your skin.
3.) Don't cry for me I've just stepped away for a little while.
--> my FAVORITE line!!!
4.) there is soooo much extra space at the bottom. I think it might help the presentation if you deleted some?
Thanks so much! I enjoyed!
Comment Written 11-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2021
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Thank you how do I get rid of the space at the bottom lol I?m
I m still trying to figure things out.
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Go back in to edit and go to the bottom of your post - the last word and just click 'delete', 'delete', 'delete', until the cursor scoots up close to the words. You don't want it RIGHT NEXT to them but maybe a space or two below. See if that works?
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Thank you 🙂
Comment from AnnaLinda
Joanne,
This is a very touching poem and entry for the Rhyming Poetry contest.
I like how you have included the seasons and symbolism of nature to
remind you of your lost loved ones.
Your short introduction poem is lovely as is your presentation.
The following line stood out to me:
"Don't cry for me I'm in the crashing waves that hug the distant shore."
I'll remember that when I walk on the beach. That thought has come to
me on previous walks.
Nice rhymes and beautiful entry,
Anna
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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Joanne,
This is a very touching poem and entry for the Rhyming Poetry contest.
I like how you have included the seasons and symbolism of nature to
remind you of your lost loved ones.
Your short introduction poem is lovely as is your presentation.
The following line stood out to me:
"Don't cry for me I'm in the crashing waves that hug the distant shore."
I'll remember that when I walk on the beach. That thought has come to
me on previous walks.
Nice rhymes and beautiful entry,
Anna
Comment Written 07-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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Thank you
Comment from equestrik
This is a lovely presentation with a lovely picture to accompany your comforting and beautiful words. You have done a good job here. All the best to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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This is a lovely presentation with a lovely picture to accompany your comforting and beautiful words. You have done a good job here. All the best to you in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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Thank you
Comment from lancellot
This is a very well made poem. It is deeply emotional and hold a lot truth. The ones we love never leaves us and is all around us. Everything is connected after all. Good entry.
notes:
Don't cry for me {Im} in the dewdrops that come with the morning light.
- I'm
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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This is a very well made poem. It is deeply emotional and hold a lot truth. The ones we love never leaves us and is all around us. Everything is connected after all. Good entry.
notes:
Don't cry for me {Im} in the dewdrops that come with the morning light.
- I'm
Comment Written 07-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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Thank you
Comment from LJbutterfly
This is a beautiful poem that reminds us that our loved ones live on in spirit. They are still part of Gods creation and part of the universe. They come to us in dreams, in memory, in feelings, and in the beautiful elements of nature...birds, butterflies, flowers, waves, etc. Your artwork and pink background are matched perfectly, but the pink lettering of your poem make it difficult to read. Green might work. Best wishes and stay safe.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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This is a beautiful poem that reminds us that our loved ones live on in spirit. They are still part of Gods creation and part of the universe. They come to us in dreams, in memory, in feelings, and in the beautiful elements of nature...birds, butterflies, flowers, waves, etc. Your artwork and pink background are matched perfectly, but the pink lettering of your poem make it difficult to read. Green might work. Best wishes and stay safe.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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Thank you
Comment from Anne Johnston
I like your poem, especially that closing line: "God was ready to call me home. It's the way the universe unfolds." I believe our time is in God's hands and we just trust Him with the loved ones that are gone from us. they will always be a part of our lives, and so many things remind us of the memories we cherish.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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I like your poem, especially that closing line: "God was ready to call me home. It's the way the universe unfolds." I believe our time is in God's hands and we just trust Him with the loved ones that are gone from us. they will always be a part of our lives, and so many things remind us of the memories we cherish.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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Thank you
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You are welcome
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
The sentiment in this poem is heartfelt. When someone passes there will always be traces that are the essence of them in everything and everywhere we travel.
You'll find me in the summer flowers that bloom and bloom again.
Don't cry for me I've just stepped away for a little while.
So good to remember.
Ralf
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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The sentiment in this poem is heartfelt. When someone passes there will always be traces that are the essence of them in everything and everywhere we travel.
You'll find me in the summer flowers that bloom and bloom again.
Don't cry for me I've just stepped away for a little while.
So good to remember.
Ralf
Comment Written 07-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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Thank you
