Football - A Novel
Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "Football Chapter 12 part 2"A mother faces life's struggles.
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Comment from BethShelby
So now we know why the dogs growled. I'm a little surprised that this nice looking coach has been able change his habits and isn't even dating. It seems that Katherine and Gabriel are becoming attracted to each other. What is Frost hoping to do? Get Katherine fired and get his job back I'll be reading each installment to find out how this story goes. I'm enjoying it.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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So now we know why the dogs growled. I'm a little surprised that this nice looking coach has been able change his habits and isn't even dating. It seems that Katherine and Gabriel are becoming attracted to each other. What is Frost hoping to do? Get Katherine fired and get his job back I'll be reading each installment to find out how this story goes. I'm enjoying it.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ulla
So they are the victims of some bad rumours. They are becoming good friends, but are certainly not in kind of relationship. Well, at least not for now. So what's next?
I'm guessing the dogs hear the click of the camera." = "I'm guessing the dogs heard the click of the camara.
I like the story. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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So they are the victims of some bad rumours. They are becoming good friends, but are certainly not in kind of relationship. Well, at least not for now. So what's next?
I'm guessing the dogs hear the click of the camera." = "I'm guessing the dogs heard the click of the camara.
I like the story. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 07-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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Thank you for the catch. I've made the change.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Sadly, people always like to nose in everyone else's business, and if truth be known, Rodney isn't the only one who would like to start trouble. But in this case, aren't we glad it's only make believe. :-) Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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Sadly, people always like to nose in everyone else's business, and if truth be known, Rodney isn't the only one who would like to start trouble. But in this case, aren't we glad it's only make believe. :-) Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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True. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Judy Lawless
This is a good chapter. We finally have the answer to who's stalking Katherine and maybe why. And you've left us with more curiosity as to what else Principle Edwards has to ask Katherine. Well done!
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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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This is a good chapter. We finally have the answer to who's stalking Katherine and maybe why. And you've left us with more curiosity as to what else Principle Edwards has to ask Katherine. Well done!
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Comment Written 07-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This Romance Fiction speaks the progression of romantic manifestation expressed through taletelling, progressed by plot and dialogues so sequentially; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
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This Romance Fiction speaks the progression of romantic manifestation expressed through taletelling, progressed by plot and dialogues so sequentially; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 07-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Now that wasn't a surprise! That Frost needs to be put away, he's a nutter! Perhaps he can share the same cell as Colin!! Lol. Poor Katherine, she just wanted a quiet life after her dreadful life with her late husband. I'm sure she must think all men are the pits. I wonder what question he wants to ask Katherine? Hmm, the way Gabe answered her when she asked if he knew what it was, makes me think it could be something nice. Perhaps being in charge of the running? Well done, my friend. Excellent. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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Now that wasn't a surprise! That Frost needs to be put away, he's a nutter! Perhaps he can share the same cell as Colin!! Lol. Poor Katherine, she just wanted a quiet life after her dreadful life with her late husband. I'm sure she must think all men are the pits. I wonder what question he wants to ask Katherine? Hmm, the way Gabe answered her when she asked if he knew what it was, makes me think it could be something nice. Perhaps being in charge of the running? Well done, my friend. Excellent. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 07-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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Hmm, we'll know next week. Thank you for the kind review.
