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Lamentations of a Lost Laddy

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My Autobiography

5 total reviews 
Comment from irishauthorme
Exceptional
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Good advice, and a couple of good references for people who may have recognizable symptoms but were not aware of the severity of their stroke. It seems that the Irish have more strokes than other races, perhaps from generations of poor, vitamin deficient diets.
A Giant Step in your spiritual awakening was your forgiveness. Not only did you gain Peace, you were able to look with a clearer view at yourself.
You are Somebody's Hero.
irish

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 11-Mar-2021
    Hey Irish thanks for the encouraging review, it was a big step for me personally I was a giant step for Bruce Mass. I was able to do that before a stroke and I'm blessed because of it thanks for the great review.

    Blessings.

    Brother Badger Cull

    Darren
Comment from lyenochka
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Thanks for the informative warning about stroke victims, Darren. It feels like you have two different posts here: one about forgiveness and the other an information post about caring for your brother.

Did not understand:
my house here Am ID wonderful city of (needs punctuation and is the ID supposed to be 'in' ?)

I had I'm running to the bitterness (??)

have realized lwhat (typo?)

Is high in nectar thick pureed food (what is? ) So stroke victims should be on a liquid diet? Thick liquid is better? I would think they might choke.

He seemed to enjoy learning to blood harder and louder. (blow?)

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2021
    Your health, thanks for your warm review and help with my typos. I am just now getting back into swing of writing, I need to learn to be more careful. About editing before I post.
    Your continued support hearing very appreciated, and it is a pleasure and an honor to share the space with you

    Blessings,

    Brother Badger Cull

    Darren
Comment from Liz O'Neill
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For me this had dual themes. One was about resentments and the other about signs of a stroke. The reader will be drawn in to focus ,more on one than the other, depending upon their situation. I was drawn in to the subject of resentments. I had a dream that I had a hole in my hand so I could see into it. I tried to cover it up, but nothing worked. There was something ugly living in it. It was so bad, I woke myself up. It haunted me so I thought about it. I knew immediately that it was a resentment I've had since 1994. I couldn't come up with a reason for holding onto the resentment so I had to open my hand and let it go.

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2021
    You're wonderful reviews illuminate the dichotomy of my writing, and thanks for sharing your interpretation of of the dream. I'm so happy to share these concepts with you and as usual you help me to understand how my writing is being perceived.
    Blessings,

    Brother Badger Cull

    Darren
Comment from papa55mike
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This is a terrific essay on a difficult subject. It's full of info that the basic person wouldn't know. There is a type-o in: Actually, (to) completely forgive, and please check the paragraph breaks. One more will make this a wonderful essay. Best of luck with your writing!

Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021
    Thanks Papa Mike I appreciate your warm review and help with the typos. Thanks so much, a pleasure and an honor to write with you here.

    Blessings,

    Brother Badger Cull

    Darren
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Exceptional
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This Biographical Non-Fiction speaks simply, the references, information with reference to taletelling the true story of your brother's stroke, expressing well measures for survival guide for stroke victim; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021
    Hey Creator great to hear from you again. You always give the greatest reviews, and I'm so happy to write as per your standards. I really appreciate your continued support here, and may the good Lord continue to bless you abundantly.

    Blessings,

    Brother Badger Cull

    Darren