Bedazzling Beauty
An Octava Rima for the Potlatch Challenge7 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
These white lacy peacocks are gorgeous and I have seen them before and they are just as delightful as the colourful ones. You brought their mystique to us here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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These white lacy peacocks are gorgeous and I have seen them before and they are just as delightful as the colourful ones. You brought their mystique to us here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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You?re one of the few who has actually seen one of these beauties. How wonderful! Glad you enjoyed this read.
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They had one in the Maldives x
Comment from BethShelby
This is a lovely poem and I learned some things from it. I've seen white peacocks in pictures but I really didn't anything about them. They are very beautiful. I wonder if the female find them as attractive as they would one with color.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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This is a lovely poem and I learned some things from it. I've seen white peacocks in pictures but I really didn't anything about them. They are very beautiful. I wonder if the female find them as attractive as they would one with color.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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I'm glad you enjoyed this piece on the white peacock and its uniqueness! Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts.
Comment from royowen
I've never actually seen one, but what you've written is fascinating. You've written a wonderful octava rima, the theme and the poem are an excellent post June, thank you for this great work, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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I've never actually seen one, but what you've written is fascinating. You've written a wonderful octava rima, the theme and the poem are an excellent post June, thank you for this great work, blessings Roy
Comment Written 07-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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I'm glad you enjoyed this piece on the white peacock and its uniqueness! Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts.
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Well done,
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Beautiful and snobby pride: "I'm still a prideful peacock through and through.
A brother from another mother, I am.
They call me an albino - that's not true.
My leucism is real - I'm not a sham.
My mesmerizing whiteness is unique.
Bedazzled ladies fall for my mystique." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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Beautiful and snobby pride: "I'm still a prideful peacock through and through.
A brother from another mother, I am.
They call me an albino - that's not true.
My leucism is real - I'm not a sham.
My mesmerizing whiteness is unique.
Bedazzled ladies fall for my mystique." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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I'm glad you enjoyed this piece on the white peacock and its uniqueness! Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts.
Comment from lyenochka
Thank you for sharing this wonderful information. Our cat loves peacock feathers and my daughter got a few from the pet store. It's the best toy ever for them but I don't think she'd like the white ones. But of course, I'm hoping they got the feathers that fell from the pea fowl. Enjoyed your educational ottava rima!
Suggestion:
Bedazzled,ladies fall for my mystique. (a space after the comma)
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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Thank you for sharing this wonderful information. Our cat loves peacock feathers and my daughter got a few from the pet store. It's the best toy ever for them but I don't think she'd like the white ones. But of course, I'm hoping they got the feathers that fell from the pea fowl. Enjoyed your educational ottava rima!
Suggestion:
Bedazzled,ladies fall for my mystique. (a space after the comma)
Comment Written 07-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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I'm glad you enjoyed this piece on the white peacock and its uniqueness! Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts.
Comment from lancellot
Very interesting, but the real question has yet to be answered. Do they attract the females or does the lack of colors leave them lonely?
Well crafted and I thank you for the notes.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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Very interesting, but the real question has yet to be answered. Do they attract the females or does the lack of colors leave them lonely?
Well crafted and I thank you for the notes.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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I'm glad you enjoyed this piece on the white peacock and its uniqueness! Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts.
Comment from Jean Lutz1
Great entry and I wish you well with it. Art selection is perfect. Your words capture the character of the fowl -- pride. Might also apply to some people and media sources I know. I know I am being a tad sarcastic.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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Great entry and I wish you well with it. Art selection is perfect. Your words capture the character of the fowl -- pride. Might also apply to some people and media sources I know. I know I am being a tad sarcastic.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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I'm glad you enjoyed this piece on the white peacock and its uniqueness! Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts.
