Let Me Be.
5 line poem.49 total reviews
Comment from L. Kalere
This is very creative and haunting. Fate sort of hangs in the balance here, so to speak, but there is clear acceptance of the consequences. I'm taken by your imagery. Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
Linda
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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This is very creative and haunting. Fate sort of hangs in the balance here, so to speak, but there is clear acceptance of the consequences. I'm taken by your imagery. Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
Linda
Comment Written 05-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear Sanku, I have never had the chance to review any of your work here on FanStory. I am so glad I chanced upon this particular beautiful five line poem.
The illustration that you have chosen to go with this particular poem makes the whole presentation an audio visual delight. As soon as I have finished writing this review, I'm going to go look at your portfolio to see what else you have written.
I hope they are All as beautiful as this one.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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Dear Sanku, I have never had the chance to review any of your work here on FanStory. I am so glad I chanced upon this particular beautiful five line poem.
The illustration that you have chosen to go with this particular poem makes the whole presentation an audio visual delight. As soon as I have finished writing this review, I'm going to go look at your portfolio to see what else you have written.
I hope they are All as beautiful as this one.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much Suzanna. I dont know if all my poems are as good. I will be honoured if you read my other poems.or small stories.
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It has a very good chance of winning the contest. It's beautifully written and the sentences flow with clarity. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It has a very good chance of winning the contest. It's beautifully written and the sentences flow with clarity. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 05-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much
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You're welcome.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was lovely! I wanted to be a ballerina but I liked my food too much! This is quite sad, really, if she falls, there will only be silence. Hmm. Well done, you've put a lot into these 5 lines. Good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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That was lovely! I wanted to be a ballerina but I liked my food too much! This is quite sad, really, if she falls, there will only be silence. Hmm. Well done, you've put a lot into these 5 lines. Good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 05-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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You are the only one who noticed that --about 'no sobs only silence.
I intended it as the crux ,the reason why she would take chances ''Thank you very much for .extra thanks for getting my point .
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
To my eyes this is a beautiful photo with a plea for freedom to choose, attached. As well, a sentiment that says, "Don't worry about me, I am not afraid."
Ralf
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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To my eyes this is a beautiful photo with a plea for freedom to choose, attached. As well, a sentiment that says, "Don't worry about me, I am not afraid."
Ralf
Comment Written 05-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much.
Comment from robyn corum
Sanku,
Oh, wow. This sounds a little ominous. Without much regard to your safety... or your money, maybe?
I do like the way the speaker is willing to take his punishment or victory either way. Thanks!
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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Sanku,
Oh, wow. This sounds a little ominous. Without much regard to your safety... or your money, maybe?
I do like the way the speaker is willing to take his punishment or victory either way. Thanks!
Comment Written 05-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much .
Comment from Boogienights
Interesting image this creates. A dancer on the edge, it just seems to fit for some reason. It's a little ominous that if she falls there will be silence...what does that mean? I like this, best of luck in the contest. :)
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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Interesting image this creates. A dancer on the edge, it just seems to fit for some reason. It's a little ominous that if she falls there will be silence...what does that mean? I like this, best of luck in the contest. :)
Comment Written 05-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
For such a short poem you have used simple words that effectively communicate the emotion and movement. I enjoyed the accompanying pic too showing the gestures. Beautiful! Thanks for sharing. Good luck!
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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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For such a short poem you have used simple words that effectively communicate the emotion and movement. I enjoyed the accompanying pic too showing the gestures. Beautiful! Thanks for sharing. Good luck!
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Comment Written 05-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This poem speaks dancer is confident of dancing all the way and direction and can never fall on ground even on game; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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This poem speaks dancer is confident of dancing all the way and direction and can never fall on ground even on game; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 05-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much.
