Let Me Be.
5 line poem.49 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Gambling can be a curse to many people as it becomes addictive and can fleece people's pockets, chasing a win that never comes, I have never understood it, but I know it can grip people and destroy their lives, a fine write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
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Gambling can be a curse to many people as it becomes addictive and can fleece people's pockets, chasing a win that never comes, I have never understood it, but I know it can grip people and destroy their lives, a fine write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much for stopping by .Gambling is a curse, a disease..I also meant taking any chances in life.
Comment from karenina
Now that's an interesting image! Life is full of gambles after all! I like thinking outside the lines... this is original and fresh. My only suggestion would be to either capitalize every line or just the first one... Karenina
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
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Now that's an interesting image! Life is full of gambles after all! I like thinking outside the lines... this is original and fresh. My only suggestion would be to either capitalize every line or just the first one... Karenina
Comment Written 05-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much
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You ar every welcome--Karenina
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Sanku: wonderful photo of the dance. I like the ballet style
of dance. It's so free and beautiful. Hope you dance too, it's
popular on the internet now for exercise. Stay well.
flylikeaneagle
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
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Sanku: wonderful photo of the dance. I like the ballet style
of dance. It's so free and beautiful. Hope you dance too, it's
popular on the internet now for exercise. Stay well.
flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 05-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
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lovely stars and thank you very much for honouring me with them .
Comment from palmart
This poem refers to "life" as a game that sometimes we play on the very edge, well away our comfort zone. But if we play so extremely, we might fall and its noise will be proportional to our distance we move away. So, we should avoid sadness because of that, just take the wreckage and move where we feel comfortable...
Recognition can be easily understood for your lesson in life...
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
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This poem refers to "life" as a game that sometimes we play on the very edge, well away our comfort zone. But if we play so extremely, we might fall and its noise will be proportional to our distance we move away. So, we should avoid sadness because of that, just take the wreckage and move where we feel comfortable...
Recognition can be easily understood for your lesson in life...
Comment Written 05-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
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Thank youvery much for thoughtfully analysing the poem
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You´re very welcome, Sanku!!
Have a great time!!
Blessings!!
Comment from AnnaLinda
Sanku,
I really like the title you have chosen for this lovely 5 line poem entry.
Well chosen words which create an image and impression and worthy message. Perfect form and well chosen artwork to accompany your
entry.
I might add a comma in the last line after "sobs" but, I guess that's up
to the writer/artist.
Very well done and best wishes in the contest,
Anna
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
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Sanku,
I really like the title you have chosen for this lovely 5 line poem entry.
Well chosen words which create an image and impression and worthy message. Perfect form and well chosen artwork to accompany your
entry.
I might add a comma in the last line after "sobs" but, I guess that's up
to the writer/artist.
Very well done and best wishes in the contest,
Anna
Comment Written 05-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
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I am totally confused with regards to punctuation .I see many poems here without any punctuation.So is this the trend?
Thank you very much for stopping by.
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Me too...
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I love the photo that you choose to go with your lovely poem,they are a perfect match.
Your words captured my attention from the first line to the last found your words to be very emotional and deep.
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
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I love the photo that you choose to go with your lovely poem,they are a perfect match.
Your words captured my attention from the first line to the last found your words to be very emotional and deep.
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 05-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much .
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Your'e very welcome have a safe and blessed Week-end
Cookie
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are expressive, interesting and creative. I enjoyed the
read of this poem. I ponder on the last line that I feel speaks volumes.
The poem flows and connects well. The artwork compliments this poem.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
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The author's words are expressive, interesting and creative. I enjoyed the
read of this poem. I ponder on the last line that I feel speaks volumes.
The poem flows and connects well. The artwork compliments this poem.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much.
Comment from DonandVicki
It is better sometimes to leave out the authors notes and let the reader/reviewer to decide the meaning of the poem. To me this is about the dance of life itself.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
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It is better sometimes to leave out the authors notes and let the reader/reviewer to decide the meaning of the poem. To me this is about the dance of life itself.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much .
Comment from Goodadvicechan
What a beautiful dancing girl... It reminds me of my grand daughter. She loves dancing.
Your poem meets the requirement of 5 line poem contest:
"Leave me
To dance
On the roulette edge
as it spins and if I fall
no sobs just silence."
It describes very well how a dancer enjoys dancing and how she feels even if she falls...
Good luck to your contest.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
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What a beautiful dancing girl... It reminds me of my grand daughter. She loves dancing.
Your poem meets the requirement of 5 line poem contest:
"Leave me
To dance
On the roulette edge
as it spins and if I fall
no sobs just silence."
It describes very well how a dancer enjoys dancing and how she feels even if she falls...
Good luck to your contest.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much
Comment from Frank Jauregui
Great poem, especially these days, when we are more and more kept from taking chances or risks for "our own good". Let me take risks and reap the consequences. I'm with you "Let me Be".
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
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Great poem, especially these days, when we are more and more kept from taking chances or risks for "our own good". Let me take risks and reap the consequences. I'm with you "Let me Be".
Comment Written 05-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much.
