Let Me Be.
5 line poem.49 total reviews
Comment from Aussie
I loved your five line poem because immediately the image of a roulette wheel spinning came into view. A hard wooden dish with gaudy colours. The ballerina, so light and lovely dancing against machinery. The photo complimented your poem beautifully. A most unusual subject, I thought you made a great impression woman over gaming table. K XX
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021
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I loved your five line poem because immediately the image of a roulette wheel spinning came into view. A hard wooden dish with gaudy colours. The ballerina, so light and lovely dancing against machinery. The photo complimented your poem beautifully. A most unusual subject, I thought you made a great impression woman over gaming table. K XX
Comment Written 08-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Patty Palmer
I like your poem. I like the story behind the poem as well. I take it as to say Allow me to run in my own direction. Let me make and learn from my own mistakes. If I fall, it's not your blame. I did it all my own and my own way. I will pick myself up and go on. That's my interpretation of your poem. Great job!
Patty
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021
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I like your poem. I like the story behind the poem as well. I take it as to say Allow me to run in my own direction. Let me make and learn from my own mistakes. If I fall, it's not your blame. I did it all my own and my own way. I will pick myself up and go on. That's my interpretation of your poem. Great job!
Patty
Comment Written 07-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your contest entry. I enjoyed reading it. Your syllable count is correct per line, the image is a good pairing, and you give readers much to think about. I believe you are saying let me make my own way in life. I will try new things and do the best I can. If I fail at some, then know I tried and don't feel sorry for me, because I don't for myself. It only means that I need to set other goals and work towards those. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021
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You did a great job with your contest entry. I enjoyed reading it. Your syllable count is correct per line, the image is a good pairing, and you give readers much to think about. I believe you are saying let me make my own way in life. I will try new things and do the best I can. If I fail at some, then know I tried and don't feel sorry for me, because I don't for myself. It only means that I need to set other goals and work towards those. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 07-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much
Comment from C2
Outstanding poem Sanku. If everyone would learn to respect a failure with silence rather than sobs they might begin to appreciate that beauty is in the risk-taking not the result. Nice work! Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021
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Outstanding poem Sanku. If everyone would learn to respect a failure with silence rather than sobs they might begin to appreciate that beauty is in the risk-taking not the result. Nice work! Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021
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THank you very much. You are the one of the very few people who got that message.Thanks for stopping by
Comment from RGstar
Beautiful...well done.
Anything with dance and the soul, fills my soul.
A beautiful delivery, with the amount of words that you have at your disposal.
Well chosen,
My best wishes.
Good luck there in the competition.
My best.
RGstar
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021
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Beautiful...well done.
Anything with dance and the soul, fills my soul.
A beautiful delivery, with the amount of words that you have at your disposal.
Well chosen,
My best wishes.
Good luck there in the competition.
My best.
RGstar
Comment Written 07-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much
Comment from Laurie Holding
This is a lovely coffee break for me, and I think you've captured your poem so beautifully with your accompanying artwork. Congratulations on a great entry, and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021
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This is a lovely coffee break for me, and I think you've captured your poem so beautifully with your accompanying artwork. Congratulations on a great entry, and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much
Comment from Leann DS
Very interesting metaphor. When you say "roulette's edge are you referring to a roulette wheel in a casino? No, I don't get out much... :-)
Very unique poem. Best of luck to you in the contest. Hugs and blessings always.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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Very interesting metaphor. When you say "roulette's edge are you referring to a roulette wheel in a casino? No, I don't get out much... :-)
Very unique poem. Best of luck to you in the contest. Hugs and blessings always.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021
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Thank you for stopping by.Yes it is the roulette wheel and metaphorical for living dangerously.
Comment from June Sargent
You have provided much food for thought in this short, but lovely piece. We must dance, if that is our desire. Even if it is on the edge of a precipice. Without taking chances, our life would simply be wasted. And there is the possibility we may fall. But we will never now if we don't try.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
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You have provided much food for thought in this short, but lovely piece. We must dance, if that is our desire. Even if it is on the edge of a precipice. Without taking chances, our life would simply be wasted. And there is the possibility we may fall. But we will never now if we don't try.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
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true .Thank you very much for understanding this .
Comment from donette1914
lovely and touching
so creative to reach ones heart
you brought this to life with well chosen words with the story line
very believable with the photo in your well penned poem
I hope for the best in the contest
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
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lovely and touching
so creative to reach ones heart
you brought this to life with well chosen words with the story line
very believable with the photo in your well penned poem
I hope for the best in the contest
Comment Written 06-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much
Comment from Vanna1
Good presentation. I like the style and words. Interesting and entertaining. I like the third line best. Good luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
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Good presentation. I like the style and words. Interesting and entertaining. I like the third line best. Good luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much.
