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melting mud on the path

melting mud in the springtime

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Comment from tempeste
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Ciao Mystery poet!

I liked the fact that you tried to use all the given words in such a reduced poem.

The theme is also interesting and dear to me seeing I live in the countryside near woods.

Love the pic you chose !

PS: you are missing one required word : pavement...

there is still time to edit and fix. Best of luck!




 Comment Written 05-Mar-2021

reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
    cool I will go back and add pavement thanks for catching the mistake
reply by tempeste on 06-Mar-2021
    You are welcome !

    . ..you have a typo .. pavement not payment

    All the best in the contest!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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You managed the impossible here to include all these words in such short poetry, so I reckon you could have a winner here, not quite sure what the green smell of death is, but I enjoyed your words here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2021

reply by the author on 06-Mar-2021
    it was fun to write


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